theprotester Posted January 4, 2014 Share Posted January 4, 2014 That hurt to 'read'. Keep it moving people. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DASsit Posted January 5, 2014 Share Posted January 5, 2014 [/img][/img][/img] Already posted in the other toy thread, just looking for some more crits on these. Thanks in advance. Positive and negative feedback welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 If any of you have time to kill, please give these videos at watch, thanks. http://youtu.be/ScODwQTPdsA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted January 6, 2014 Share Posted January 6, 2014 I don't get into straights much. I should though, this one was fun. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yahunga Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 This guy is going to be a mass shooter. Bwaaahaha 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 7, 2014 Share Posted January 7, 2014 Torch, from one toy to another im gonna crit yo' piece. lol k, So 1st the drips didnt really work to well plus the things at the bottom coming off the ends of the letters weren't really good cause there was heaps of them and the bubbles well were just bubbles >_>. 2nd the N is to small the S Counteracts the Y cause they are so far apart, but flow comes with practice ;) + the bits coming off the S just doesnt work haha just keep it simple. I love that character tho haha. Crit me please!!! Not the character though that character can kill itself. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DASsit Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 Broali, you said you want some crits so here ya go. the halo on the bottom of your K,N and the characters feet is sloppy. Don't forget about finishing the piece!! the fill is nice and I like your letter stye. more focus on finishing and it would be golden Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 Thanks, Good advice :) Seems like we are the only posting toys haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 Thanks for the crits.....:) appreciate them. I really need to practice more and more. But until then i will try to give some constructive crits. Broali: Your letter are good, and i like the style. The only fact that i need to mention is that the K is not perfect. The K is composed fron 3 bars the second bar of your K is too small, and the first part off the peace is biger then the last 2 letters. Try to keep the same hight. And for my N, it is smaller because it is need to be small :) if you know what i mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 8, 2014 Share Posted January 8, 2014 Haha thanks I realised the SY Was bigger after I had coloured :( And u gave me a wake up call for my K's ahaha ima try keep it 3 bars now thanks and the n, I kinda meant it is better if you keep them same size but it is anyones opinion tho :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DASsit Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 First sketch with my new markers. PLEASE GIVE SOME FEEDBACK. i tried to keep my bars consistent and have the same height throughout. i got a little tight on space near the end so ill just move into the centre of the page next time Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOOGLE? Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 how do people that only have 1 post already have a bunch of prop bars? cough* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CILONE/SK Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 how do people that only have 1 post already have a bunch of prop bars? There are a few of us that prop new people just for the hell of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aLBERThOFFMAN Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 And then the rest of us just neg them. Consider yourselves lucky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DASsit Posted January 10, 2014 Share Posted January 10, 2014 [/img] STILL looking for crits on my last few and these guys here. positive or negative feedback welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The-Sable Posted January 11, 2014 Share Posted January 11, 2014 Everyone does it better, Im just playing around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hasemler214 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 First time posting, a few hands; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tralertrash Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 Re: beginners post here... image hosting 10mb limit free pic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hasemler214 Posted January 12, 2014 Share Posted January 12, 2014 Alot of people on here would prosper from simplicity. letter development before backgrounds, characters, textures, fills, highlights, third dimensions, shadows, etc.. And @ tralertrash, not sure what your shooting for graff wise, but dope cursive font in top right corner . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muls Posted January 14, 2014 Share Posted January 14, 2014 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muls Posted January 15, 2014 Share Posted January 15, 2014 Any crits on the E? I couldn't come up with anything worthwhile. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inappropriate_Responder Posted January 15, 2014 Share Posted January 15, 2014 I'm not gonna lie, its pretty SLIE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muls Posted January 15, 2014 Share Posted January 15, 2014 I think I fixed it a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 19, 2014 Share Posted January 19, 2014 Fucking round with colour's Crit Ticks welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muls Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 O and M need work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
broali1 Posted January 21, 2014 Share Posted January 21, 2014 Ha yeah i rushed the O gotta work on it tho, but the M I fucked up. thanks ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masta0080 Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 Did this one a couple of weeks ago. Didn't have any markers so its just black and white atm. Crits maybe? idk, thought id post it, nothing better to do. tkx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
masta0080 Posted January 26, 2014 Share Posted January 26, 2014 If for any reason the link isnt working im just gonna copy paste the URL to it. http://www.flickr.com/photos/115588082@N04/12160072583/ Thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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