Sevage Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 is it a graffiti battle or alphabet battle? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIRISfour Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 NAMES: SNEEZ, INSEKT, UBER, SAIM, FROSTY, SPADE, RAID, HONE, PAYUP, SWERV, LURCH, CASTRO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 you have a point yetsio, but i want to see what you guys are really made of. no matter what you do its going to come down to the letters no fill or fancy coloring can hide bad letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIRISfour Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 for my bird, messing around with new style Keep your style straight. Your markers? old sketches? throw em away. Get 1 pencil with an eraser, 1 black pen, and a lined notebook. Look down at keyboard and draw. Your shit is the epitome of toy, come back once you got them straights down kid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
THEATK Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 battleboard on evilfuckers.net is back up got a mouse....... then make a save :-) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted February 1, 2011 Share Posted February 1, 2011 crits on my simple piece and tags/throws? bump for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 damn bro thanks its going to be a minuet before i could throw something like that I have been practicing this weekend and im going to try and post it asap its not very good lol you seen my shit nothing special but with practice and time I should be able to throw something like that again thanks for throwing some shit together for me be sure to check my shit out when i post and let me know what you think cuz i know i need a lot of improvement and advice from people who know what they are doing always helps This is intimidating lookin'. Just Work on keepin' it straight. You see how it starts to drift up? Fix that, and you'll be chillin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Im not really one to be giving crits speak but i would say ure S is a little on the large side. Generally im liking it, would be nice to see some cleaned up pieces from you. Cant comment on tags and throws, mine are non existent :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 I think you should go simpler on the handstyles, and make the tail of your S not as extending. @speak Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yare Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 @cruise: so clean. the only thing i have to say is that on your silver one, the c and r seem higher up than the rest. good work though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yare Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 ignore all handstyles except for maybe the BLC's. the rest, i know, are shit. and yea i now realize the chars head looks like an ass shitting. crits/tips pls? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 go simpler see how cruise uses really simple letters and fill, but still gives the letters some style and attitude thats what you should be doing at this point doing over the top cursive letters with bad extensions is not going to help you when starting out more complex stuff will come with time, but for the time being do simple concise letter structures Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yare Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 a bit better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yare Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 also, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 CRUISE, your shit is ALWAYS the highlight of the page, man! I wish I could do simples half as good as you can, bro. Goddamn! Big props to you, sir. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 i think this is cool except for what i circled. besides that add your other letters and practice that for a while. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Nice, nice! Your shit is always fresh too, man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 i fucking suck.im gonna re do this and post in up too. harsh criticism is needed.rip it apart. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 wait you were being serious when you asked for a name. i thought you were joking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 yah.im not gonna write that shit i just wanted something to do while this snow storm anally rapes my state. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 crits? i havent really taken graff all too serious until now,and im realizing i suck hard considering,ive been writing for like 3 years almost and idk...i feel like i should be less...lame.haha.so any crits would be coool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 i think it's pretty good. you right mero right? whenever you draw up one of those it looks mad clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 thanks.i think i shoulda spent more time on it.i basically drew it out in like 5 minutes or something.thats my biggest problem,all my stuff i do i rush it.i dont think ive ever taken more than 20 minutes on a sketch ever... i used pen so its hard to go back and fix anything haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 hahaha! yeah. but all the mero's i've seen from you have been clean. just keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 all exchanges 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Umire, I think you just killed it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 Umire your shit ain't toy anymore, try cleaning up the sketches a bit but dope stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 2, 2011 Share Posted February 2, 2011 damn ive been sketching for more or less 7 years ,,and am mad jealous of ur letter skill....haha/...dopppe stuff umire. romero that rock is ill as welll....cant find anything negative to critique about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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