Polyp Posted January 25, 2011 Share Posted January 25, 2011 few randoms Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
so far so good Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 i like the middle best, polyp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heyzues Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 cruiser ur hand is dope for how long it is.. nek i dont really think those extensions work on those letters dry wretch is it crone or drone? maybe space out ur letters more..work on making em the same size to i guess? i liked the hand in the bottom 1up and 3 to the right. edict....those extensions dont work. juca...that is illllll dude...the characters work with it too i think its drone, and the alternating sizes thing was on purpose, i was just trying out different shit. and the letters are supposed to be close together, because thats how the connections work. mad people do that, especially with the "one" in their name, haven't you seen it before? this hands actually pretty generic, but it beats my old one, so i'm going with it. of course there's alot of room for improvement, just not in those ways. not being stubborn or anything, but yeah. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 gross is it wrong that despite being very poorly drawn, i still almost immediately recognized who that was supposed to be? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 gross is it wrong that despite being very poorly drawn, i still almost immediately recognized who that was supposed to be? so what do I need to work on the most? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 human proportions human proportions human proportions human proportions human proportions human proportions human proportions human proportions 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 those nipples dude... look like some salami nips or some shit hahaha dayyyumm theyre big haha 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIRISfour Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 The piece would have been better had it been cleaner. I'm not one to crit characers tho, because I suck at them myself. made this for my rapper buddies, It needs work. The D is a bit big. Any other suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 I hate sketchers block! Fuck me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 those nipples dude... look like some salami nips or some shit hahaha dayyyumm theyre big haha well obviously you don't now who it is. :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 The piece would have been better had it been cleaner. I'm not one to crit characers tho, because I suck at them myself. made this for my rapper buddies, It needs work. The D is a bit big. Any other suggestions? Lose the back bits. its the only letter that has it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 The piece would have been better had it been cleaner. I'm not one to crit characers tho, because I suck at them myself. made this for my rapper buddies, It needs work. The D is a bit big. Any other suggestions? use "bars" to construct your letters, parts of most letters arent of equal length Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 few random ones i dont think ive uploaded Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven907 Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 The piece would have been better had it been cleaner. I'm not one to crit characers tho, because I suck at them myself. made this for my rapper buddies, It needs work. The D is a bit big. Any other suggestions? the D may be a little big but i think it looks great the size of the D gives it a special kind of look anyway good job im trying to set up a throw up in my book so i can post a couple pics on here show people what i got (im not as good as you) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ome Depot Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 megafail. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIRISfour Posted January 26, 2011 Share Posted January 26, 2011 I do use bars, I just chose to use no pencil because I'm just ballsy like that :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SIRISfour Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Very clean. I wish half of these toys knew that's how it's to be done when you start off. Not arrows, crazy letters, and wack color schemes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 nice colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatsoi Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Newt, your structures off. The E and W, the bars are bad. You see how on your N, the | bar and \ bar come out of the same place, where they overlap perfectly? The bottom of your E, and the bars on your W, and the bottom of your N have to do the same. On the last page, the only good thing is the Road piece. Ome, do simples. Polyp, work on your throws a lot. Pen freebie for a battle on AMA. The N is too fat and the extension going into the middle is wack, but I'll fix that when I sketch it out. The bottom of the S is weird, too much dead space, but again, I'll fix it when I sketch it out. Few other small problems I need to fix. I think it has some potential. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 for a skate park next week 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 yep. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 eons, all your posts look exactly alike. and that little O doesn't help anything. that yoka looks clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noridna Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 what do you guys think of this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 its drone, and the alternating sizes thing was on purpose, i was just trying out different shit. and the letters are supposed to be close together, because thats how the connections work. mad people do that, especially with the "one" in their name, haven't you seen it before? this hands actually pretty generic, but it beats my old one, so i'm going with it. of course there's alot of room for improvement, just not in those ways. not being stubborn or anything, but yeah. no beef...but whats the point of asking for crits if you're being a bit pretentious? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raven907 Posted January 28, 2011 Share Posted January 28, 2011 I feel that i have a soild foundation in block letters nothing complicated just a few random words that drew up last night while talking shit with my roommates i want to do something more complicated with the words but i wanted to post them before i did anything to fuck them up I know i need a lot of practice with bubble letters i just cant get them to look right any ideas or tips to get my bubble letters looking better? more pics will be in my next post. . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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