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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by swif1, Apr 2, 2002.

  1. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,844 Likes Received: 405
    The bars on your X don't line up making the letter out of whack. the hole in your R doesn't line up and the down bar of your T is skinnier than the two side bits coming down off the top. Look below for what I mean about lining up the bars. When you're starting off you have to construct your letters until you have enough experience to create them. Read back through this thread, all the mistakes that can be made have been made and the lessons are already there to be learned. Take the time to read, listening is have the effort of "putting in work".
     
  2. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,844 Likes Received: 405
    A crude effort but you see what I’m saying about constructing a letter.

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  3. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
  4. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,844 Likes Received: 405
    Stick to letters until you get them as they are the basis of graf.
     
  5. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
    just got 500stickers in the mail today
     
  6. Goldape

    Goldape New Jack

    Joined: Nov 4, 2017 Messages: 24 Likes Received: 0
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    So I drew this in September and was my first complexity wilds Ryle I've gotten my hand style down and throwie my mentor says but we haven't met up since for me to show him this what's your thoughts
     
  7. simon sandleshit

    simon sandleshit Junior Member

    Joined: Jan 30, 2014 Messages: 171 Likes Received: 61
    restart with everything you think you know. go back to keyboard letters..work on your handstyle more..look like youre trying way too hard.
     
  8. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
  9. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
    i was thinking 666 baphomet
     
  10. Goldape

    Goldape New Jack

    Joined: Nov 4, 2017 Messages: 24 Likes Received: 0
    K thanks
     
  11. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
    bruh they kicked me outta the sketch thread i posted like the best work this whole month on that thread bs
    but here goesIMG_20171124_123817.jpg
     
  12. Decyferon

    Decyferon Moderator Crew

    Joined: Jan 12, 2008 Messages: 10,524 Likes Received: 632
    Man that's unreadable. There is no letter structure. Try doing simple straight letters
     
  13. Decyferon

    Decyferon Moderator Crew

    Joined: Jan 12, 2008 Messages: 10,524 Likes Received: 632
    Also if you think you posted the best stuff of the last month in the sketch thread then you're delusional
     
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  14. shaolean13

    shaolean13 Junior Member

    Joined: Oct 22, 2017 Messages: 103 Likes Received: 10
    im past simple letters though im just trying to find my own style i did simple letters for like a year straight for a long time homie knowmsaying i wllll post here in the toy thread though all that was was a handstyle that i turnt into graffiti and letters dont have to be legible as long as i like them and i like the way that it looks preciate the somment thought
    DECYFERON
     
  15. Hua Guofang

    Hua Guofang Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Oct 29, 2013 Messages: 1,844 Likes Received: 405
    A year is nowherre long enough for simples, this stuff takes a lot of practice and patience.

    Secondly, it's not about time it's about quality and your simples just don't have that yet. This is not a dis, it's straight up honest advice. Your bar lenghts aren't consistent, your letters aren't balenced and your whole word (as a picture) doesn't flow. Again, not trying to dis, just giving the advice you need.

    Trust us, stay simple for longer than you think you need to and keep doing them until people that are better than you tell you to get creative. You don't get to decide when you're good, that's the responsibility of people who are better than you. And that's advice for life in general, not just graf.
     
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