Tough Love Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 okay, ive been meaning to start a comic for a while now, but ive either run out of free time, or the shit i do is too time consuming, so im trying to do it in a way that produces quality work, and at the same time doesnt take forever to do. that being said, i will post 2 frames that ive done, and you guys give me your input on how you like the coloring style and whatever. Now, the shit im going to post isnt that exciting, but any sort of criticism is appreciated. thanks this is the first sort of coloring style im going to try....tell me what you think.... ill post some other ones later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gat Bush Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 yo is that second frame a giant frog bison carriage? looks interesting tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fondles Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 shit looks fresh. Reminds me of The Maxx, the artwork and coloring, not the content (all 2 frames of it). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrChupacabra Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 looks nice. i'm not big into comics, but i like how it looks. thumbs up from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteveAustin Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 looks good so far...lets see more. of course contents king...so hopefully thats on point as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnnyHorton Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 I'm going to go ahead and say I like what I see post more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElectricitySucks Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 show the the frames with humans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarcasm Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 thumbs up from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mkonji Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 The highlights on the rocks could be a little less orange. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weapon X Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 Nice! I wouldn't mind seeing some more lines in the grass, though. Damn, I've always wanted to be a comic writer. Keep practising and maybe one day I'll hire you to be my artist. lol, but I'm actually serious! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 yeah, a little more detail in the grass, and maybe incorporate some light browns/mauve for highlights on the rocks..but I'm feeling the overall style ..nice.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fondles Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 naw fuck more lines in the grass, that shit looks tight just like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumy Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 ^^^^ while I agree it "looks tight just like that" a couple of lines wouldn't hurt...but whateves to each his own.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mackfatsoe Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 cool so far. who knew the destruction league was so versatile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CACashRefund Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 I like the carriage scene best, good use of the shading there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gunm Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 you need a lot more arrows and bubbles. throw in some sick wit it spray cans and you'll be set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abracadabra Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 looks good to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 25, 2005 Author Share Posted May 25, 2005 hey thanks for all your feedback guys. im usually one to do a lot more detailed and colored work, but every time ive tried to do a comic in that way it ends up taking way too damn long, so i tried going for a lot more simpler this time around...thats why there isnt too much shading done nor tooo much detail in terms of color. as for the grass.....yeah i totally get that it could use some more lines....but i usually fuck up the grass i draw, so i figured id quit while im ahead... ill get some more frames drawn and inked tonight, so stay tuned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weapon X Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 Those two frames remind me of something, I'm just not sure what. Some stuff I read in the '80s..maybe Conan. Shit, I'll tell you when I remember. Read this thread in Untitled for a cool interview with Neal Adams. I really enjoyed reading it. It won't help you in terms of technique, but I'm sure you'll find it interesting. Can't wait to see more, homie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 25, 2005 Author Share Posted May 25, 2005 haha damn weapon X. my shits defenaitly not on par with a lot of good work. im a bad artist like that guy was describing. hahahaha wonderfull now i wonder if i should continue working on this, or just practice and get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fermentor666 Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 Looks pretty good, I wouldn't not buy it based on the art, which is usually the first thing I look for when picking out a new comic. Kind of hard to tell how you draw people from those two panels, though. Your inking is definitly a lot better then your drawing, not to say that the drawing is bad. The inking is nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 25, 2005 Author Share Posted May 25, 2005 word ferm. im thinking of making this an online comic that ppl get to check out every week. hence the simplicity and such Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhiteOx Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 i like it, post more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schnitzel Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 second that motion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 25, 2005 Author Share Posted May 25, 2005 heres a character im thinking about using. i wont give anything away though. She might look a bit different in the final version (ie. better) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fondles Posted May 25, 2005 Share Posted May 25, 2005 I'd hit it. but i would eradicate her face first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fermentor666 Posted May 26, 2005 Share Posted May 26, 2005 You've got some talent Tough Love, keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 26, 2005 Author Share Posted May 26, 2005 heres almost the entire first page inked.......ummm...yeah, i still need to color it all, add some words, and finish the bottom frame.... note the name "teaser" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarcasm Posted May 26, 2005 Share Posted May 26, 2005 i think the word "badass" fits here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 27, 2005 Author Share Posted May 27, 2005 updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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