torch21 Posted September 6, 2012 Share Posted September 6, 2012 and crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 8, 2012 Share Posted September 8, 2012 i am the only one who is visit this thread ????????????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30nb0n35 Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Your control has really come alond but your letters still need work. Concentrate more on letter shapes rather than little squigles and effects. Keep your letters looking solid not like they might fall apart. in that last piece your D is the best. Also work on your handstyle, it helps you understand structure too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 thank man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted September 9, 2012 Share Posted September 9, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted September 11, 2012 Share Posted September 11, 2012 Untitled by BZ CT, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted September 11, 2012 Share Posted September 11, 2012 hey Baze, your proportions need work. look at more font styles. the skinny center bars of the B and A should carry through to the Z and E. same with the fat bars. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted September 12, 2012 Share Posted September 12, 2012 alright thanks. ps ignore the first one, i ment to delete or edit but the oontz wouldn't cooperate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pgflybaby Posted September 13, 2012 Share Posted September 13, 2012 some dope shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 14, 2012 Share Posted September 14, 2012 baze, i know you had wanted to learn about arrowz. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 15, 2012 Share Posted September 15, 2012 Pencil Sketch by The.Kid.Nek!, on Flickr Sunday Sketch by The.Kid.Nek!, on Flickr New England Kid by The.Kid.Nek!, on Flickr Grey Matter by The.Kid.Nek!, on Flickr Breaking Neks by The.Kid.Nek!, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARA333 Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 could i get some opinions Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 18, 2012 Share Posted September 18, 2012 Some stenciles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted September 21, 2012 Share Posted September 21, 2012 damngurl ara is doing it right. nek zytar and yokai look good. my crits suck so I just compliment. ignoring the fact that this is a two inch wide outline on my calculus homework, anyone want to give some pointers on the structure? I feel like loosening up this style has made it come a long way but I want further tweakage before I waste cans on it. Looking at it I think I would bring the top of the p out more and do something with the center of the e. maybe fuck with where the bottom leg and bottom of the loop on the r meet too. Anyone have something they could think of? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 The alphabet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bizar Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 Torch21 - keep going man, those bars in your alphabet are looking proper, although the y is looking a bit funky Sureisshitty - I think your piece could benefit by having that bottom bend of the S come down a bit further and the middle of the E pop out bit more, looks good though ARA - that fuck the police piece is real nice, the only issue is the k, the bottom leg should be converging with top leg when it meets the backbone, look at the K in torch's alphabet, also try some thicker 3D, IMO it will look way better that poodle thin 3d Color killer - those are looking fresh, no crits for you, keep doing what your doing then proceed to advance your style when you feel comfortable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted September 22, 2012 Share Posted September 22, 2012 I HAD TO USE A DECO WITH AN ENORMOUS NIB FOR THE BLACK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Alphabet 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 damngurl ara is doing it right. nek zytar and yokai look good. my crits suck so I just compliment. ignoring the fact that this is a two inch wide outline on my calculus homework, anyone want to give some pointers on the structure? I feel like loosening up this style has made it come a long way but I want further tweakage before I waste cans on it. Looking at it I think I would bring the top of the p out more and do something with the center of the e. maybe fuck with where the bottom leg and bottom of the loop on the r meet too. Anyone have something they could think of? first off, the p and the r should match up with each other a bit better, they are such similar letters, an r basically being a modified p, and yet they seem to be coming from two different sources. i'd say try to make them mirror each other a lil bit more. same thing with the S and E. instead of having the E's nose come down at an angle, make it more horizontal to match up with the S's angle. and the top bar is too large in relation to the S's. also, the R's top bar is missing that same flare you got goin on with all your other letters. i'd also drop whatever those things are coming out of the bottom of the S that looks like testicles or some shit, but thats just me lol. and drop the extention on the bottom of the P. and maybe make the bottom bar of the E connect with the R in some way. these are just my opinions though, do what you want man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 Alphabet 2 your handstyles make me believe that you traced that shit, if not though props on the alphabet but then that also means you need to step up your handstyle game like crazy man. no hate, but i see alot of cats who are on different levels of skill depending on what branch they are focusing on. i.e. people who can rock a decent simple or even semi wild but their hands are shit. you got to keep that shit more or less on the same plane. its like working out, people who focus on only upper body but then have little chicken legs look fucking ridiculous. you got to balance that shit out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 25, 2012 Share Posted September 25, 2012 your handstyles make me believe that you traced that shit, if not though props on the alphabet but then that also means you need to step up your handstyle game like crazy man. no hate, but i see alot of cats who are on different levels of skill depending on what branch they are focusing on. i.e. people who can rock a decent simple or even semi wild but their hands are shit. you got to keep that shit more or less on the same plane. its like working out, people who focus on only upper body but then have little chicken legs look fucking ridiculous. you got to balance that shit out. man thanks for the crits. to be honest i don't understand what you want to say, how can i improve my letters. This is only a theme downloaded from a site is not my concept i just practice letters that is all. but thank's a lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted September 26, 2012 Share Posted September 26, 2012 romero has some good crits. i been telling torch since he signed on to drop that underline and quotes from his tag. it's making a toy tag look more toy. torch, helpful hint...when you kick out the bottom of a T to the left, it's gonna look like a J, unless you're pro. and look at all the fonts you can. i think that's helpful, but no need to post straight up copied alphabets. especially if you are gonna forget the Q. sper, if you're gonna use a lined paper, might as well use the lines! drop the P down so it hits it. and the S and P fit together, and the E and R fit, but the base of all them don't match size-wise. don't mind my drunken crits. i'll take some flicks where my sketches are, and maybe can get some crits this week, 'cause i need help too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 29, 2012 Share Posted September 29, 2012 Some crits i need Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted September 29, 2012 Share Posted September 29, 2012 i like where your going with this style its a real mix of styles but one thing i dont like is the arrows the one on the S is blocking the mid section letter and the star in the D and O are like placed on there if you get my drift they should of had 3d coming off the inside before they where showing the blue from the backdrop as that is confusing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted September 29, 2012 Share Posted September 29, 2012 thank you for the crits man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyuga Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Hyuga Hey, I've been working on this tag for awhile and was just curious what others think......... I have no friends who write so its hard to get opinions....... I've asked a couple non-writer friends what they think it is and they all cant seem to read it, which worry's me... Also, First Post! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 did this for a coworker that loves drake. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted October 2, 2012 Share Posted October 2, 2012 i will need some crits to know what to do whit the s. DRAKE You need to go back to the sample letters and practice only that for the moment :) after that will be good........ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ratyzone Posted October 3, 2012 Share Posted October 3, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted October 4, 2012 Share Posted October 4, 2012 thats fucking fresh^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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