ENKM Posted November 14, 2012 Share Posted November 14, 2012 I seriously hope you weren't in jail for that ^ Naw man charges not related to graff lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kluse-One Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 Just got like 8 cans of rusto for 18 dollars, heres a few road trip sketches Pretty bad, havent done anything worth some concentration in a while and im thinking about writing either Swine or Nes , so mehh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
descone Posted November 23, 2012 Share Posted November 23, 2012 you seem to have a pretty good grasp on your letters. they all look pretty solid. there's already a pretty well established swine out there (swine cdc) not that that really matters. just wanted to say it before someone else did. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ENKM Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 Simple letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted November 26, 2012 Share Posted November 26, 2012 i like it ^^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30nb0n35 Posted November 27, 2012 Share Posted November 27, 2012 You need to thin out the middle bar of the N and your Ks legs are conecting too high so it looks awkward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pieceandlove Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 I come up with abe as in abe from 'Abe's Odyssey' the video game from the 90's cuz im all sneaky-like and sayin fuck you to the system. ANYWAY, this is just shitty ms paint so.... I'll post a pic of an actual deal later maybe. kinda new so i dont feel expd enough to give crit just yet but some crit would be appreciated. thanks peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pieceandlove Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 k here we go crits welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brew Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 I'm new here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 ABE: awful, go back to basics. try throw ups, straight letters and tags before you go shooting for pieces. cue: dude, calm your tits. you're trying to put in too much when it's quite clear you don't know how to do it and make it look good. lose the bizarro arrows shooting out of random spots on your letters, too many bits and pieces hanging off making this look super weird. also, I see the CUE but the TWO is a shambles. the T should not be joined to the W in two spots, it makes it way too confusing, and the O looks like a D. on the plus side you have a relatively good grasp of 3D, overall work on your letter structure, it lacks flow and filling in the space with bits and pieces isn't fooling anyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brew Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 cue: dude, calm your tits. Yes, I'm a woman. x] Thanks 4 tips! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stay_fitted Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 just gettin back into graff 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stay_fitted Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 first sketch in years literally Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pieceandlove Posted December 3, 2012 Share Posted December 3, 2012 Coo cool, ya I'm brand-new-status as in brand-spankin-like so I'm still working on the basics :P Thanks tho, I'll keep working and try to post progress. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pieceandlove Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 k more of my toy shit haa.... just need some food for thought to try to get the ball rollin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 Kober: extension on top of the K: lose it. look at your piece and pick out the parts that don't flow. for you that would be: the right hand bars of your K (width and extensions are not working) and the extension off the bottom of your R. I'm not feeling the E in general, maybe trying pulling the bar in the centre across so it looks more in line with your B. Abe: bite shit, that's the only advice to give someone at your level. no amount of input is going to make you better until you actually progress past the 13 year old scribble on your trapper keeper level. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stay_fitted Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 trying some different name combos 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stay_fitted Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 not feelin the A, just something i whipped up in like five minutes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pieceandlove Posted December 4, 2012 Share Posted December 4, 2012 k tango sounds good -knew i should have just listened to espo's rules to begin with!:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lungmucus Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 Progression.. please critique. Still have a lot of work as far as structure and sessing out what angles to keep and which to ditch but im starting to get some form down after a few days with the new word.. this is what i started with and the dark blue with green 3d is what i ended up with a week later. Really still testing the waters but lmk what you guys think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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tango 24 Posted December 7, 2012 Share Posted December 7, 2012 the first one you posted is terrible, stop trying to link your letters up until you're ready to do it. the simples are meh, your U looks like a V just keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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