SureisShitty Posted May 26, 2012 Share Posted May 26, 2012 I'll try and solve the squabble thing by not looking at the last page. No offense meant to anyone, I guess I did come off as a dick but I wasn't in the mood to do the english vocabulary any justice. This is all a lot better. What I meant the other day was try to keep always keep bars solid and not get those funky blocks overlapping each other and not doing much like in the aegos. I think you should get what I mean. That and sending lines from bars into the letter that don't belong like on the i in the satire. Also I don't entirely dig what's going on in places like the top rights of the n and a's in the aesen straight(but it is appealing overall), but some extensions could be saved if you don't send lines into the wrong places. But keep trying new things and pay attention to specific bars and styles that look exceptionally good to you. Recently been trying to get more complicated and throw in those "bullshit extensions" and it's cool to see how what I do in straights carries into the more complex stuff. Been busy but I'll come back tonight or tomorrow and put some pictures in this post to cut back on the textual overload. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ratyzone Posted May 27, 2012 Share Posted May 27, 2012 Some stuff Im working on...I tried something on the fill in... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARA333 Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 whats a good way to improve my handstyle? Just fill pages with tags? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dstroyerz Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 opinions? tips? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 Go simple dstroyerz most of that is unneeded and the letters need work. God damn that piece sucked. Yeah so I guess this is what happens when you're too lazy to color and draw things on a larger scale than the margins of your calculus notebook. My baaaad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DIC3 Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Haven't posted anything in a while Need criticism! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Someone do an outline for me? I seem stuck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted May 31, 2012 Share Posted May 31, 2012 Any crits? I'm trying to make it flow together a little better. Any advice would be great... Good or Bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted June 1, 2012 Share Posted June 1, 2012 keep the style of the bars more uniform, like the bottom right of that K doesn't match the style of the rest of the piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MN_Nice Posted June 1, 2012 Share Posted June 1, 2012 What's poppin prophets? Sper you got some mad potential. Pen freebie Bs battle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Thanks man. dig that stuff also, makes me think of muse from bs did he change his name by chance? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MN_Nice Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Thanks man. dig that stuff also, makes me think of muse from bs did he change his name by chance? lol yeah i did Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 my first sketch in a while, see lots of new faces in here, keep it up and listen to others when they say to keep it simple. That red/pink SPER looks nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thelonertype Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 The hollow throwie is most definitely a work in progress: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Everything artistic is a work in progress. Welcome to 12oz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 FLOW, You're on the right track. Keep everything simple. buy like 300 pieces of paper and do the same outline over and over until you finish. repeat with the tag. Each time, look at it and try to see whats right and whats wrong. Eventually you'll clean it up. SPER, I Really like your stuff. The red and blue simple's letters are so nice. 4EYES, Really Nice. The doom piece is killer, the throwie kinda looks like YEYES, even though the y is different. My 2 cents. DIC3 Simplify. Try to work on your letter structure, use bars if you don't yet. BAZE sketch 4 crits by ...BZ, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stankyfinger978 Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 quick sloppy bs! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stankyfinger978 Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 quick sloppy bs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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stankyfinger978 Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 I don't know why my posts end up at the beginning of this thread and not the end....... wtf? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEPx Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DIC3 Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 The hollow throwie is most definitely a work in progress: You're from Kanata right? Btw, nice tag =) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dcor8 Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 @MN_Nice, I like those 4EYES.. that pink/blue rotating and green/black at the bottom are fresh.. nice and simple but they look clean.. keep at it.. something ive been realizing, gotta keep em simple.. I agree with the below crit about the throwie, the 4 resembles a Y.. not because it is the same as the true Y but its just hard to see that it is a 4 unless you know the word is 4eyes.. I can see it being pretty hard to come up with something to distinguish it more but just mess with a few new things see if you can get something going to make the 4 really stand alone @BAZE, to maybe try something new try working with a vanishing point for your 3D.. it doesnt seem like you are right now but that can add to the consistency of a piece nicely and make it more artistically accurate. Just drop a "DOT" somewhere on the page, below the piece, above the piece, left or right, and anchor your 3D angle lines to that point. Just moving the vanishing point into new positions/perspectives can really change the entire style of a piece.. you can make it look like its exploding out of a point or leaning a particular way.. just a quick tip that I think would help make your pieces pop more.. keep at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 imo vanishing in a certain direction on a simp looks weird though, actually I just don't really like it. doing it into the center is gudt though stanky you said it yourself I can't even read that. 3d dude I'm curious to see what you will be posting Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thelonertype Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 Everything artistic is a work in progress. Welcome to 12oz True that. Thanks for the greet FLOW, You're on the right track. Keep everything simple. buy like 300 pieces of paper and do the same outline over and over until you finish. repeat with the tag. Each time, look at it and try to see whats right and whats wrong. Eventually you'll clean it up. Took your advice into consideration, and it's actually starting to look better now! Will post pics further on down the road once I've really cleaned it up. Thanks gear You're from Kanata right? Btw, nice tag =) I'm afraid I'm not. Thanks for the compliment though :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 Dont know if i posted this... Just messing around with Some other other letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mindfux Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 i'd try to stay away from using words like "King" so loosely, if you're far from one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Theres a reason i posted in toy thread and clearly i dont write King nor would i choose to. More along The lines of looking for crits on my letter structure but thanks for pointing out The obvious. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abovethefogg Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Recent-ish junk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 Help me pick my best tag or what parts you like the best? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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