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it sucks, and there is NO way that is one continuous line. That little peak on the A isn't part of the continuous line...

actually the outline is all conected, lmao.......

it sucks! great! say what you say it's all good!

just curious, what level you on Burns? any pics?

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cred, decent entrance. advice, take it or leave it, is be mindful of your negative space. try to make that balanced as well. I know the C and D have no mid bars to take up space, but with leans, serifs, and whatever the fuck you want to extend, the space should feel even. maybe get a bigger book. the R and E are suffocating.

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ehhh...

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Crits... and if someone can do a rough outline or something it'd appreciate. Especially throwie

 

KER good, keep it simple, keep practicing, and you'll develop. I'm not too great at all but I feel myself develop since when I started. You probably are, but if you don't use bars to form letters use them. (When I got that tip my letters went from down syndrome imperfections to halfway decent.

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