heyzues Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 working on simps this is my 4th or 5th try at it. keeping my letters hollow for now so that my bars/lines are more visible and easier to crit also jazzy colors dont fix shit letters im learning step by step. crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I suggest leaving space between your letters so that they don't connect; those connections don't look that great. Keep it up though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheZarosOne Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 tell me what i can fix pls Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 bump that^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted April 11, 2012 Share Posted April 11, 2012 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/story4.jpg[/img]"] http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/story3.jpg[/img]"] still developing this shit. so crits would be nice. just dickin round Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tramp.stamp Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 http://i1141.photobucket.com/albums/n581/majoroner/story5.jpg[/img]"] forgot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 I like the last one the best, Tramp Stamp. With that being said, it's still not perfect; some of the extensions, such as the ones on the T and at the bottom of the R are very out of place and strange looking. Also, I feel like the O is so out of place from the rest of the letters. I assume that's what you were going for, but nonetheless I can't help but feel that it throws of the flow of the entire rest of the sketch... Some of the work that you post is bad, and some shows potential, such as the last one that I just referenced (the pink one). Try to stick closer to that style and play off of that; work with what you're good at and build off of it. Regardless, keep it up; you'll get better in time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 eski, is that a throw? Its way over the top. Lose all the confusing shit and show me some pretty letters. Throws are meant to be simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 eski, is that a throw? Its way over the top. Lose all the confusing shit and show me some pretty letters. Throws are meant to be simple. Yeah, throws.. it's all one line connected and its quick...... thx for advice.... ill try to simplify.., Exctually.... I been looking at ya posts and your no one to give advice! Nothing personal lmao.... but I would check myself before others.... someone wit experience wanna crit? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 eski, is that a throw? Its way over the top. Lose all the confusing shit and show me some pretty letters. Throws are meant to be simple. ......and actually..... what's so confusing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 i think it's hot. it's not your run of the mill regular type of shit. it has its own style and flare. that's just my opinion, but then again i don't have the posts to back up that i'm a beast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 i think it's hot. it's not your run of the mill regular type of shit. it has its own style and flare. that's just my opinion, but then again i don't have the posts to back up that i'm a beast. WORD,im just trying something new..... experimenting..... ya know! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 Fuck all the drama and bullshit. Just tell people how to improve their shit. Keep shit talking somewhere else. BAZE sketch - something new by bazeoner, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 12, 2012 Share Posted April 12, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 just messing around... letters still need some work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donnalee Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 Good points…I would note that as someone who really doesn’t comment to blogs much (in fact, this may be my first post), I don’t think the term “lurker” is very becoming to a non-posting reader. It’s not your fault at all, but perhaps the blogosphere could come up with a better, non-creepy name for the 90% of us that enjoy reading the posts. cheap oakley sunglassses discount oakley sunglasses oakley sunglassses cheap chi hair straightener chi flat iron chi hair straightener Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 ^true shit haha Invader zim is bangin' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 few flicks from past few days mostly xchanges IMG_0228 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0226 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0224 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0221 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0220 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0215 by centrysams, on Flickr 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 IMG_0233 by centrysams, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 your r's are hurting. especially on the last one. you should probably keep the spines straight. but i think that's mostly up to personal taste, so whatever and you probably start putting more time into developing a better tag, because you've seem to got piecing and straights down, or almost down, and that's the only thing that's really bad. your straights could use a bit of work in regards to proportion and uniformity too, now that i think of it and that slotr is really messy. letters not consistent sizes, too much going on overall, especially with the s, and its just a bad s to begin with, blah blah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 you see this? this is what your shit should look like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 i gotcha . will try to do more simple shit. that flicks pretty old . iv come along way since then . even added a letter lol but i get what ur sayin . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 16, 2012 Share Posted April 16, 2012 trade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 a bit of practice simple latters :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BuRnsZwalLz Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 Yeah, throws.. it's all one line connected and its quick...... thx for advice.... ill try to simplify.., Exctually.... I been looking at ya posts and your no one to give advice! Nothing personal lmao.... but I would check myself before others.... someone wit experience wanna crit? it sucks, and there is NO way that is one continuous line. That little peak on the A isn't part of the continuous line... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 Yeah, throws.. it's all one line connected and its quick...... thx for advice.... ill try to simplify.., Exctually.... I been looking at ya posts and your no one to give advice! Nothing personal lmao.... but I would check myself before others.... someone wit experience wanna crit? Wow, i just realised this was aimed at me lol. Im fully aware of my level bro and i work at it everyday so i dont particularly care for your opinion. besides, i dunno where your attitude is coming from, you obviously cant take criticism when everywhere you have posted that throw people have said to "work on it" to say the least. Try to chill out and draw something better if you wanna keep the critics quiet. I dunno what the fuck is wrong with people in this thread... If you get some criticism you dont like get to fuckin work and prove the bastards wrong, simple as that. Plus a flick for going on... YOKAI loves you eski! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 aww shit, yokai wit the black nail polish! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 Wow, i just realised this was aimed at me lol. Im fully aware of my level bro and i work at it everyday so i dont particularly care for your opinion. besides, i dunno where your attitude is coming from, you obviously cant take criticism when everywhere you have posted that throw people have said to "work on it" to say the least. Try to chill out and draw something better if you wanna keep the critics quiet. I dunno what the fuck is wrong with people in this thread... If you get some criticism you dont like get to fuckin work and prove the bastards wrong, simple as that. Plus a flick for going on... YOKAI loves you eski! No feelings here, it's all good, i call it how i see it...... if everyone tried writing with the same style, this whole game would be boring..... im just trying a lill sumptin out.... i know it needs work...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.