BlackFlux Posted October 20, 2005 Share Posted October 20, 2005 Take a look at the F in this one. Pay no attention to the rest of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 20, 2005 Share Posted October 20, 2005 its much better that way. id keep it that way 4 now i have barely done 2 sketeches in the last month, so iv got ta fukin get bak into it. did this for a battle...i thort it was gonna b alrite..then it wasnt...:( i hate the Gs and i 4got that second I, so i just shoved it in there like that.... anyway.. ye.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 20, 2005 Share Posted October 20, 2005 and i posted most of this on BS and PG, but im postin it here now too... a sample of my painted shit: illegal: rooftop: friends room: in my garage: thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Sorry for the size... I always put big images on my site and if 12oz allowed image uploading, I'd have resized images but since it's remote loading, sorry... Anyway, whenever peegee is down I show up here and flood you guys with my latest shit... What do you think of these? I have a lot more to share but I'm already slowing things down with these huge-ass images... Feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Jank: Friend's room and last one are the best... Friend's room, I ain't feelin' the S but the rest is good... your fills really work on most of these... keep that shit up... The rest... they are okay but that last one is HOT. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 Originally posted by Kink572@Oct 8 2005, 10:14 AM This is my first sketch ever, I would like to get some Constructive critisism and advice. Quoted post hye mane i Really liek this.... keep that style up next time maybe all more colors.. jsut try it.. but i like it!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tortech Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 First Peice Comments please? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casekonly Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 that yellow doesn't look too good. the r is funky, too. good for the first piece, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 21, 2005 Share Posted October 21, 2005 cheers E_B_A. i love your style. i think those pen sketches are fukin raw too. not personally feelin that second pic...the one with the colourful ppl things...i dont really get it... but ther est is mighty hot. keep it up. post sum more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anew Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 oh dangg. eba and jank is on here now. we toys are saved! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LATSCAR Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cans Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 that throwies ok, but those handstyles!!! and try to keep your letters closer togethor Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 jank: Looking at it again, I really slept on the second to last piece. That shit is bangin. tortech... I really like that... for a first time, that's pretty damn good... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluts_r_us Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 what u guys think?...should i go paint it somewhere Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gongon Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 first piece..wat you tink?.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 tortech, if thats your first piece, then ooh. its mighty good. i really like it. lastcar, i think the letters are too far apart, like he said b4, and i would change the K..personally dont like it..dont think it looks like a K somehow... and i dont like the Os..wit the things in the middle. try n make it all look like one thing, rather than a bunch of individual letters...u know. kaos. the bottom right of the K is squigly and dont fit with the rest of the letters. i really like the A. and i think the hole in the O is a little big. sorry if iv come off all judgemental n stuff.. but now u can all diss my page if u want... im bored of always doin bowtie..im experimentin wit other stuff...hehe. what a dude: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluts_r_us Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 any comments on my pic? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 o ye shit i mised that. its only ickle. ye its quite nice. it works well . would prolly b v.easy to throw up fast as well, so if u want to then paint it, u dont need our permmission! keep wwerkin on it tho. i think the J (if it saysJOC) could be altered... i dno really... keep at it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluts_r_us Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 i know i dont need permission but i wanted to know if people would say shit like "that makes me hate graff" when they saw it...and what do u mean about the j? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 lol fair play. to be honest i dont really know. i think the bit at the bottom where it curls back on itself looks a lil stumpy, somehow... but really it fits the style. to keep the togetherness of the piece maybe it shoudl stay that way. i mean no1 would normally notice it if the walked past an saw it, so maybe keep it as it is. hit it up a bit, see how it looks... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted October 30, 2005 Share Posted October 30, 2005 Originally posted by gongon@Oct 29 2005, 11:34 PM first piece..wat you tink?.... Quoted post There are 14 million other KAOSes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AWProvidence Posted October 31, 2005 Share Posted October 31, 2005 what yall think? i need some criticism/ feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ralf deyga Posted October 31, 2005 Share Posted October 31, 2005 the last one is coo.... do it on a wall tho..who cares if u can bomb on paper lol... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrEM1 Posted October 31, 2005 Share Posted October 31, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DKbmx836 Posted October 31, 2005 Share Posted October 31, 2005 i decided to fill it in with silver, but only had a broad tip to do so, so i kinda fucked it up with that, but w/e. but yea, someone give me some feedback and what to work on here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DKbmx836 Posted October 31, 2005 Share Posted October 31, 2005 fuckin double post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted November 1, 2005 Share Posted November 1, 2005 havent posted in a while :yuck: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted November 1, 2005 Share Posted November 1, 2005 More new shit by me... Some feedback for the other stuff on this page... jank: Marvin the Martian piece is straight up fire. AWProvidence: I really am not feeling anything until that FRESH throw, the PERO forth pic down... that throw fucking rocks. All those throws are tight as hell. But the rest... needs work. KREM1: work on simpler letters but keep up your fills, 3D, halos and shit like that. It looks decent but the letters need work. DKbmx: I'd break your letters down a bit simpler but keep everything else the same. Good use of the basic elements but the letters are not strong. So there's some feedback for you all. Now tell me what sucks about my shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted November 1, 2005 Share Posted November 1, 2005 cheers eba. first. that dondi iwhite sketch is incredible. like so good is makes me stiff...(not really...but u get the point.) as is that jam master Jay one. insane! in terms of letters. i have nothin to say on how to improve em. they are way too good! (sept i dont like the sideways "A" in the red wit pink background 1) those little odd looking gummy bear men are makin me crack up... i dont really like em, but they are funny as hell. keep it up man. quality work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted November 2, 2005 Share Posted November 2, 2005 Ha... I didn't have a name for those characters but "Gummy Bear" works great... thanks. It may not be your speed but I think they have a style of their own... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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