Re: This is my blog. *NH
I'll give A useful critique, Here is what could be improved.
The girl you say trash, need a better pic of her and her assets, I have low standards and would smash, plus don't dis your friends.
The shirts, get your own unique ideas, I have a hatred for all this celebrity or pop culture inspired hipster "art".
The girl you say smash, we need better pics of her as well, the more skin the better, she looks good.
Just to make it better for 12oz, don't use the word fucking and rant so much, we have enough here by people who do it better.
Last but not least, Don't have art school students modeling for you in homoerotic poses, hire some bums or smashable females.
I hope this was helpfull.;)