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My comic

Discussion in 'Channel Zero' started by Tough Love, May 24, 2005.

  1. Tough Love

    Tough Love Senior Member

    Joined: Oct 10, 2004 Messages: 1,894 Likes Received: 2
    okay, ive been meaning to start a comic for a while now, but ive either run out of free time, or the shit i do is too time consuming, so im trying to do it in a way that produces quality work, and at the same time doesnt take forever to do. that being said, i will post 2 frames that ive done, and you guys give me your input on how you like the coloring style and whatever. Now, the shit im going to post isnt that exciting, but any sort of criticism is appreciated. thanks

    this is the first sort of coloring style im going to try....tell me what you think....

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    ill post some other ones later
     
  2. Gat Bush

    Gat Bush Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 23, 2003 Messages: 9,817 Likes Received: 129
    yo is that second frame a giant frog bison carriage?

    looks interesting tho.
     
  3. Fondles

    Fondles Veteran Member

    Joined: Mar 31, 2001 Messages: 7,858 Likes Received: 24
    shit looks fresh. Reminds me of The Maxx, the artwork and coloring, not the content (all 2 frames of it).
     
  4. MrChupacabra

    MrChupacabra 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Oct 10, 2001 Messages: 10,940 Likes Received: 681
    looks nice. i'm not big into comics, but i like how it looks. thumbs up from me.
     
  5. SteveAustin

    SteveAustin Veteran Member

    Joined: Mar 12, 2002 Messages: 7,042 Likes Received: 2
    looks good so far...lets see more.
    of course contents king...so hopefully thats on point as well.
     
  6. JohnnyHorton

    JohnnyHorton Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 2,201 Likes Received: 0
    I'm going to go ahead and say I like what I see

    post more
     
  7. ElectricitySucks

    ElectricitySucks Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 13, 2001 Messages: 6,395 Likes Received: 24
    show the the frames with humans.
     
  8. sarcasm

    sarcasm Elite Member

    Joined: Oct 30, 2003 Messages: 3,352 Likes Received: 35
    thumbs up from me.
     
  9. mkonji

    mkonji Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 384 Likes Received: 0
    The highlights on the rocks could be a little less orange.
     
  10. Weapon X

    Weapon X 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Sep 6, 2002 Messages: 14,905 Likes Received: 202
    Nice! I wouldn't mind seeing some more lines in the grass, though.

    Damn, I've always wanted to be a comic writer. Keep practising and maybe one day I'll hire you to be my artist. lol, but I'm actually serious!
     
  11. dumy

    dumy Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 5,056 Likes Received: 0
    yeah, a little more detail in the grass, and maybe incorporate some light browns/mauve for highlights on the rocks..but I'm feeling the overall style ..nice..
     
  12. Fondles

    Fondles Veteran Member

    Joined: Mar 31, 2001 Messages: 7,858 Likes Received: 24
    naw fuck more lines in the grass, that shit looks tight just like that.
     
  13. dumy

    dumy Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 5,056 Likes Received: 0
    ^^^^ while I agree it "looks tight just like that" a couple of lines wouldn't hurt...but whateves to each his own..
     
  14. mackfatsoe

    mackfatsoe Veteran Member

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 6,532 Likes Received: 168
    cool so far.

    who knew the destruction league was so versatile.
     
  15. CACashRefund

    CACashRefund 12oz Loyalist

    Joined: Oct 8, 2004 Messages: 14,171 Likes Received: 272
    I like the carriage scene best, good use of the shading there.
     
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