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My comic

Discussion in 'Channel Zero' started by Tough Love, May 24, 2005.

  1. Tough Love

    Tough Love 12oz Senior Member

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    My comic

    Discussion started by Tough Love - May 24, 2005

    okay, ive been meaning to start a comic for a while now, but ive either run out of free time, or the shit i do is too time consuming, so im trying to do it in a way that produces quality work, and at the same time doesnt take forever to do. that being said, i will post 2 frames that ive done, and you guys give me your input on how you like the coloring style and whatever. Now, the shit im going to post isnt that exciting, but any sort of criticism is appreciated. thanks

    this is the first sort of coloring style im going to try....tell me what you think....

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    ill post some other ones later
     
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  2. Gat Bush

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    Gat Bush - Replied May 24, 2005

    yo is that second frame a giant frog bison carriage?

    looks interesting tho.
     
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  3. Fondles

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    Fondles - Replied May 24, 2005

    shit looks fresh. Reminds me of The Maxx, the artwork and coloring, not the content (all 2 frames of it).
     
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  4. MrChupacabra

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    MrChupacabra - Replied May 24, 2005

    looks nice. i'm not big into comics, but i like how it looks. thumbs up from me.
     
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  5. SteveAustin

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    SteveAustin - Replied May 24, 2005

    looks good so far...lets see more.
    of course contents king...so hopefully thats on point as well.
     
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  6. JohnnyHorton

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    JohnnyHorton - Replied May 24, 2005

    I'm going to go ahead and say I like what I see

    post more
     
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  7. ElectricitySucks

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    ElectricitySucks - Replied May 24, 2005

    show the the frames with humans.
     
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  8. sarcasm

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    sarcasm - Replied May 24, 2005

    thumbs up from me.
     
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  9. mkonji

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    mkonji - Replied May 24, 2005

    The highlights on the rocks could be a little less orange.
     
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  10. Weapon X

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    Weapon X - Replied May 24, 2005

    Nice! I wouldn't mind seeing some more lines in the grass, though.

    Damn, I've always wanted to be a comic writer. Keep practising and maybe one day I'll hire you to be my artist. lol, but I'm actually serious!
     
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  11. dumy

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    dumy - Replied May 24, 2005

    yeah, a little more detail in the grass, and maybe incorporate some light browns/mauve for highlights on the rocks..but I'm feeling the overall style ..nice..
     
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  12. Fondles

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    Fondles - Replied May 24, 2005

    naw fuck more lines in the grass, that shit looks tight just like that.
     
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  13. dumy

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    dumy - Replied May 24, 2005

    ^^^^ while I agree it "looks tight just like that" a couple of lines wouldn't hurt...but whateves to each his own..
     
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    mackfatsoe - Replied May 24, 2005

    cool so far.

    who knew the destruction league was so versatile.
     
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    CACashRefund - Replied May 24, 2005

    I like the carriage scene best, good use of the shading there.
     
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