afsi Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 i have tried afsi s advice and heres my result comments??? it does look better to me, but its kinda odd giving feedback on a hand nobody can tell how NOT to write ur name If you can write that shit over and over for at least a hour a day, i'd say its ready, regardless of how it looks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 it does look better to me, but its kinda odd giving feedback on a hand nobody can tell how NOT to write ur name If you can write that shit over and over for at least a hour a day, i'd say its ready, regardless of how it looks. OK but i mean is there any thing i can add or change to make it look "professional" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 LOL professionalism goin on in hereeeeee i'm OUT! :D For real though, add some quotation marks on either side, an arrow at the end of your C and make the S into a dollar sign. You will be all city in no time!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afsi Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 OK but i mean is there any thing i can add or change to make it look "professional" hmm... a 'professional' looking tag? i'm not sure i've seen one of those i suppose a shortcut could be to find someone else that uses ur letters, or just find a tag in ur hood u like, and try the alphabet in that font. the most i can do is tell you how to make urs look more like someone elses, which isn't real sound advice, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muddyluv Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 sleazeside thanks for the feedback. n yea i always drew venom with like slime drippin between his teeth. but i feel u on the other stuff. massgraff put it well. "why not" thats somethin i keep in mind a lot lol. but umm what did u guys think of the pikachu piece? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 twas dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 More pics, less talk haha..... can't crit what you don't create. Midnight Purp by New Era Killer, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Alright my tag is done the way i like it haters gonna hate :D no more tags will be posted from me Final Tag by Snoc994, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 13, 2013 Share Posted February 13, 2013 Slackers.... ...swimming in color! by New Era Killer, on Flickr 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Feedback Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist 666 Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 try using a different form of bar slow down on the crazy fills, just do solids for a bit. think about consistency in the 3d snoc: lose that haters gonna hate attitude. its fucking retarded. haters are going to hate because what you're doing fucking sucks. don't get an ego, ever, but especially not until you understand basic letter form. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Illuminati Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 jask don't connect your letters, lose the fill and try keeping it simple with just one color. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aLBERThOFFMAN Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 try using a different form of bar slow down on the crazy fills, just do solids for a bit. think about consistency in the 3d snoc: lose that haters gonna hate attitude. its fucking retarded. haters are going to hate because what you're doing fucking sucks. don't get an ego, ever, but especially not until you understand basic letter form. This. Everything Fist just said answers pretty much every question in this whole thread. Ever. Keep it simple till you grasp the basics, and even once you do keep keeping it simple. Progression takes time and practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Tips .. Please critique Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist 666 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 haha. oh man... just don't do that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Fixed my k Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalex Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Any constructive criticism on my Eon piece? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 17, 2013 Share Posted February 17, 2013 Ok so killertiger I'm beginning to think you don't understand what anyone is telling you and not trying to harsh your style because I've been in the same spot but you didn't fix anything. The word simple couldn't get any more clear. Lose the 3D,the outline, the hightlights the fill and work on just the letters. A messy room with a fresh coat of paint is still a messy room. Clean that shit up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalex Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Any suggestions for my Eon piece? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Aight thanks bro, next piece I drop in the forum will be in awhile , I'm gonna work on my letter structure Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Something I'm working on.... Sneek Peek by New Era Killer, on Flickr .....slackers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 try using a different form of bar slow down on the crazy fills, just do solids for a bit. think about consistency in the 3d snoc: lose that haters gonna hate attitude. its fucking retarded. haters are going to hate because what you're doing fucking sucks. don't get an ego, ever, but especially not until you understand basic letter form. i understand the ego part i can loose that shit anytime just if you come and start telling me what i do fucking sucks isnt going to help me at all. anyone can come up and say that. next time you tell anyone they suck at least tell them what they can do better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 Nobody would have to tell you your shit sucks if you read all the advice given in this thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 18, 2013 Share Posted February 18, 2013 hehe i did read the whole thread and im working on my letters everyday so we will see how it will end up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Alright here is something really simple. expecting lots of feedback please snoc by Snoc994, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 I really think you should do that about s thousand more times before you keep asking for feedback when you're just going to get the same answer. Smh you don't listen much. It's not going to just happen without practice. You're the only who can make your work better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalex Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Lol. Anyone? Can anyone give me suggestions on how to improve my Eon piece? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Follow the same advice given to snoc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jalex Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 So just keep doing my letters over and over and i'll just get a better at it? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Well try to make all the bars in your letters fairly the same and yes keep doing it over and over until its like s second nature. I'd practice every letter tho not just your own but that's just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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