colorkiller Posted February 6, 2013 Share Posted February 6, 2013 It's Toy Time! by New Era Killer, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Hey guys im new here and trying to perfect my tag so i want to get some feedback from you guys and also my pens sucks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist 666 Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 its a little early on to be complaining about your pens. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 I did this one a month ago just to see how it would work out feedback ??? SAMSUNG by Snoc994, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 lets just say it's not good. try and make all of the bars the same size and please don't put arrows before everyone starts telling you that "you need moar". read through this thread and you will see that it all starts with the fundamentals (simples). Practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afsi Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 i like the orange to yellow fade, ]\ think the "F" could do with some elbow room Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKCA_DKA Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Blazing the heat! by New Era Killer, on Flickr Trying to get this thread going again...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Black book piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 I would appreciate some feed back on my JASK piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist 666 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 1. stop doing anything other than letters, skip that shit in the background. 2. learn perspective. you 3d is fucking awful and inconsisten 3. your lights/highlights, whatever people call them are totally inconsistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eviltrailer77 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 You have to think "where is the light coming from, where is the light going to fall?" Take a solid object, turn off all the lights except one stark light source and just observe how the light interacts with the object. Move the object and the light source taking mental note of where the shadow falls and the contrast it creates. I hope this makes sense, I'm all messed up on whisky and cough syrup. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muddyluv Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Couple pieces i've done recently. Thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killertiger667 Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 What about now Fist666 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 You didn't really change much.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 Blazing the heat! by New Era Killer, on Flickr Trying to get this thread going again...... the NEK at the top in green, yes!! someone should resurrect the toy battles, best toys simple wins etc in other words keep doing simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muddyluv Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 Thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muddyluv Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 @colorkiller just wanna say ur shit is dope. i like your style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muddyluv Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 n yea i realize the pokeballs extra shitty Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrHook Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 rez! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afsi Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afsi Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 Hey guys im new here and trying to perfect my tag so i want to get some feedback from you guys and also my pens sucks it'd be easier if you kept the letters the same height and stretched one or two horizontally. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
afsi Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 Don't make the top of the S so weighted. Don't make the T two different parts. Lose the retarded dangle on the R. Lose the double line connection from the R to the N. Try rocking that as a 1 line top of the S to the T to the U top of the U to the R, R to the N. Pretty simple but on a clean wall, shit would look like drugs. Wouldn't even have to fill it in. The R->N link is a little wierd though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snoc Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 i have tried afsi s advice and heres my result comments??? 2013-02-09 17.36.59 by Snoc994, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaaaaaaaaa Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 sick! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleazeside Heights Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 Couple pieces i've done recently. Thoughts? the actual word has potential, i like where it is going. The M should not be overlapping, and the y looks a little crunched.... your tag should not be bigger than your word, and those giant heads are weird. why does venom have a chinese finger trap in his mouth? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleazeside Heights Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 why are all these random ch0 people in here? has it gotten this boring? it has. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted February 10, 2013 Share Posted February 10, 2013 why does venom have a chinese finger trap in his mouth? Why not man? Why not... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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