Doodle Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 don't worry, there is a new one every week Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
painter504 Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 my latest [crits] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tha whut Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 shudda push the t in more and close the gap between n and the T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
painter504 Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 yeah should have closed in that dead space ..... thank 4 the input 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 captain hindsight to the rescue! The T does look a little off though, as does the extension on the top of the Y. Overall, looks pretty dope, i'd like to see a little more color interaction in the fill, but that's nothing major. ***also, try to keep the paint in the toy paint thread or this thread will get mad congested with toy bullshit plywood painting.*** Goes for everyone... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 slackin of at work.. revamped my previous post a bit?? jea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 decided to do a quick Junior simple as he was last person who posted in here BUMP for doing it right, simple style. Alot to be learned from this, study it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 decided to do a quick Junior simple as he was last person who posted in here Double bump for bottom of page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 yo paint, i think the P needs a hole, it doesnt register as a P straight away. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 neon, no need to rebump things that don't need crits. Kinda makes you look like a dick rider. Pretty sure he posted that as an example of what a solid simple could look like. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 crits on the top post would be MUCH appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 crits on the top post would be MUCH appreciated. Your throwies letters are lacking. Only the e looks like its self. All of the letters in it have potential just redraw that a bunch of times and the letters will look better with some tweeks. The straight letter is ok. Not bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 crits on the top post would be MUCH appreciated. the R needs a spot for negative space to define it, the A is too complicated, simplify for sure, the E is ok, but very unrefined, and the K is awkward, doesn't seem to flow very well after the first 3 letters. Not a fan of the throw, it seems way more complex than your technique level is comfortable with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 what do yall think 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 not bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 D?SR...? Put a hole in the R if there is a hole in other letters. Good progressive size. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KADE_ONE Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 desr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 thats an e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bubu tlaloc Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 very interesting...my 2nd post to get thread-permission...ughhh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Toys r us kid! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EXECUTIVE_FINGERBLAST Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 ^^^ start with simples and be patient Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 the R needs a spot for negative space to define it, the A is too complicated, simplify for sure, the E is ok, but very unrefined, and the K is awkward, doesn't seem to flow very well after the first 3 letters. Not a fan of the throw, it seems way more complex than your technique level is comfortable with. very helpful. i cant figure out the negitive space in the R. any suggestions? more crits would be nice, suggestions, opinions.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 a few Rrrrrrrrrsss but i have to admit im very drunk also drunken ungly letter style Greed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 oh shit this is the toy thread haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 i meant to post the R not the Greed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 ^^^ start with simples and be patient Thanks for the advice....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 simple, smooth and stylish. Apply this state of mind to everything; quick, simple, smooth and stylish is the key. props issued. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 lookin for some crits on my throw. tried to keep it simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted June 30, 2011 Share Posted June 30, 2011 crits please? I never sketch anymore... this is a quickie! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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