tanxxx_one Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 am i a toy?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 possibly, but you sure are a fucking retard Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 ignore the s .. i know its messed up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 the letters structure is all over the place dude..practice simples... heres a few i did recently..just to show that i practice what i preach 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 ive practiced simples.. its just the sketch.. trust Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 yeah scoe what happened there? looks like you regressed. FREAK: the second one is dope as hell, looks almost like a wild piece, but it has that simplicity to it. PROKED: feeling that sketch. the only thing that bothers me is the B and R Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scoe.1 Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 crits.? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 ^ change your name. and service camp, im trying a new style but ive been doing simples for awhile now , ill post more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulOne Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 dope simple freak. (the 2nd one) banger, that's lookin real good. i wouldn't do the highlight type stuff on the left side - it looks forced when curve inward around the previous letter. the right side looks real good tho i know i need to be putting up some simples but i haven't had time. anyway, worked on coming up with some sort of throwie. here's what i ended up with. like everything, it'll probably be a progression and as i do simples it'll change, but here it is nonetheless and here's some character work for good measure: and i know i'll get hell for posting this, but i just wanted to try something. the fill is god awful, but i tried to simplify the letters. the y is too hidden. anyway, i know it's not great but here it is Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 compared to your previous material presented to the panel, the work doesn't quite match up... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 ETCHR is a snitch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulOne Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 compared to your previous material presented to the panel, the work doesn't quite match up... dear god please tell me you're off the biting thing. get over it - i didn't copy "wiggle" or whatever the hell you said his name was Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 another one.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiddly.bits Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 @Scoe, Watch bar widths, the top of the right hand bar E fattens out at the top. Same with the O. It hangs over the top of the next bar. The top of the O is huge compared to the rest of your bars. IMO you need to find strong simp letters (Look at Freak, his simps are great and look like he knows what he wants to do and they don't look weird, it all looks in place), but props for doing simples - it is better than your last post. If someone is on here and can give you better advice, i'll edit my post and remove everything :D. ALSO; @Soul: Mr. Wiggles is a font on "graffiti creator" (google it if you really want to know :P). Graffiti Creator is held in contempt by just about every writer as toys think it's a quick fix to being ultimate grafftagbombkingeroner. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DissentersSeekingUtopia Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 what say ye? kept it simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DissentersSeekingUtopia Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 thought so. old sketch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted May 2, 2010 Share Posted May 2, 2010 Freak, that second simple is absolutely dope. Nice work, bro! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the lone bomber Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 exchange for the homie finnish it off with this giant J. Finally some improvement. Keep the fills simple, and the extensions simple. And the jay rollin' proper. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dna216 Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 bubble v's are super hard, but keep doin your thangg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 what say ye? kept it simple not enough arrowz but your obviously the best in your 666 crew Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 yo Utopia, you and your crew needa get some bars...quick. Practice before you throw any of that up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idk401 Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 another new. drop shadow on the G got fucked up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 nice banger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 banger, it's coming along. the pointed nose on the E seems out of place, and a little overkill on the bends in the R. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 for my friend meechie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProKed1 Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 banger, it's coming along. the pointed nose on the E seems out of place, and a little overkill on the bends in the R. I totally agree on both counts of what ur sayin. Those bother me too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 @Phere: The H and C are out of proportion compared to the other letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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