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wow i hope you made this post as a parody, because this is just too much......

Silver is pretty dope.

haven't posted here in a while. says arpegio, just in case it came out a little hard to read

It's an interesting start, but you don't seem to fully understand letter structure yet. for now work on simple block letters and don't add any extensions or arrows or anything, just letters. do this and they would be easier to read also.

dope as fuck eido. simples at their best, nice work. just work on your 3-d a little bit, but still good.

BOOM1969: nice simples man, like the bolsak sketch better. the B needed some work though, the vertical bar doesn't match up, but everything else is tight. i understand what you were trying to do with the 3-d on the second sketch, but if the letters are coming from different directions you got to try to make every point of the letter match up to the vanishing point. props.

oh my bad sech. disregard that then. then that goes to whoever it applies to. fuck.

SECH: step number one: lose the ego. That shit ain't going nowhere. Step number two: get rid of all arrowz or extensions. Step three. learn basic letter structure and start from scratch. Simple letters. i'm not hating, these are actual steps that will help you improve in this game. On the other hand, i like your fills. nice choice of colors

SALTINE: your 3-d is off, but in general it's dope. RECNEPS: i like that first sketch better.

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JUST: you're one step closer to having style, even though it seems like a long ways away. props. KOTE: dope keep it up

amazing how many starters like to write SOUL. if i remember correctly that was probably my first name too! anyway, like ocean said: SIMPLES

site, what happened in 2008 where your style suddenly shaped in to what it is now, did another writer influence you? props.

DR.SCAPE: on the character the only thing that bugs me is his right arm. there's a strange lump after his bicep and it looks like if his forearm was joined by only muscles and skin. you could extend the length of the forearm a little more. the style is dope but try looking at anatomy of the arm to get that straight. just my 2 cents.

great idea for a thread. looks like the name "bolsak" gave you more options for style development . nice post.

yeah scoe what happened there? looks like you regressed. FREAK: the second one is dope as hell, looks almost like a wild piece, but it has that simplicity to it. PROKED: feeling that sketch. the only thing that bothers me is the B and R

IF THE LETTERS IN YOUR SKETCH DON'T LOOK LIKE THIS... ALT+F4

PLUS: your 3-d seems half way accurate, but you must work on your letter structure. do simple fills, simpler letters, like on your keyboard.

PROKED: you're off at a good start. keep doing them simples and using consistent width on your bars. the only thing i'm gonna say is, since you're working on paper, just write your full name and take it easy and slow. do that and it will be dope in no time anyone else wants to exchange? i'm up for any name.

haha sneek you've come a long way. SOUL: you want constructive criticism? then do simples, that's all.

are you gonna do simples, or are you gonna continue copying from graffiticreator?

i'm feeling some of those sketches, you have to watch out for your bar width consistency. do that and they'll be better DOODLE: that sketch is good and simple, but it has no flow, and the letters don't mix. try thicker bars or bring them closer together, just see what works best.

SKUMBUM: thanks man, glad you like it. FREAK: ya dawg, but every1 knows u need arrowz. but really.... the broken off piece of the U was kinda supposed to be a piece of the F. i think going even simpler would have worked better. with out all the bits chopped off

just trying out some block letters, but in my opinion it needzmoararrowz. block letters aren't graffiti enough. POLYP: nice to see you're posting again, i always dig your sketches. i don't have much to crit, besides that i'm not really feeling the handstyle. oh and SOUL: i actually think your handstyle is better than the pieces, you have to do simples.

ELI: here's yours, sorry i kinda rushed the E and screwed up the D, haha.