DonaldFour Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 new outline like someone else said, the O looks like an A. the connection with the A and N looks a little forced/exaggerated, and the bottom extension on the C would look better if it didn't shoot out to the left. and the middle leg of the N that you always do bugs the hell out of me, it's too stiffly bent up. with that said, you need to start putting some motion into your letters... your letters are so rigid, it makes it look like it doesn't really flow at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 i agree. the N middle bar makes the N look like it has down syndrome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 thanks for the real crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted December 5, 2009 Share Posted December 5, 2009 and another thing i notice you do alot, you always use the same connections, or you use them ALOT. try to draw some different shit up and try a new style. Im not basing your style, but maybe you should switch it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imn0tcreative Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 Hey all, thought I'd introduce myself with a sketch: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 simplify ur letters..;practice straight font like simples from microsoft word till ur arms fall of..and you cant tell the difference between them...and then u are ready to experiment based on ur newfound knowldge of letter structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 any thoughts? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AEON916 Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 daaaaMMMMMMMMMMMN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 that kele looks too good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 the K looks good, I think you could work on the Es and L, it is almost like the K is from a different piece, overall it looks very rigid, maybe try getting a bit looser with it and getting more flow and interplay between the letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 bump this a few pages back too. give me crits on this. i felt it had more movement than the last one? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 simples. critique? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted December 6, 2009 Share Posted December 6, 2009 no need to worry about the 3-d for now, jus do outlines till you get one thats clean. try replicating fonts in your text editor for a bit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daoist Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 This is done for my boy sewer repping it in new jerzzz and peace to all the cats bombing nj Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daoist Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 Oh and a throwup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 nice tigers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frazzeta Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 In all honesty, i dont think you've really improved shaken, and i hate your extensions, they're all the same. Try a complete different style and see how that works for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 Damn, fuck. I've been rhyming i forgot about this site lol, but i remember yous every so often, i really need to get some flix. Ocean, your getting better man, from last i saw you, which was ages ago. i think tone down on the extensions a little bit, but your bars are pretty consistent. most on this page need to work on straight letter simples and get the proportions of letters the same for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
root_pl Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 Very nice tiger's. Ehh... now something new from me, i sketching more and more, but my letters still sux. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 7, 2009 Share Posted December 7, 2009 Do Basic Letters... No additions or extensions. I like the throw and hand style, but on the throw, make the top left solid... either round OR pointed, not both. Don't Do Arrows Yet. I like the 3d. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
root_pl Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Ok. Thanks for advice ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
root_pl Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Again something from me : Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 That's A LOT Better! Fix the K a little, it looks like H A l E to me now. Exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
root_pl Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 sure... what you write ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
root_pl Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 o0 thats very good !!! I like it :) thanks man... i will sketch something from you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 idk if that hiero cat even still comes around but whatever exchange for hiero, meant to be a simple at first hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 Veritably Clean: not really feeling that Hier, don't want to look like a prick but it has too many extensions and a strange letter structure. But the sank handstyle is dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TECO Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 YO HAKS LIKE THAT STYLE RIGHT THERE THE HOE IS CLEAN Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted December 8, 2009 Share Posted December 8, 2009 lol. /\ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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