salesmanoftheyear Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RECNEPS Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 damn, looking at the last page it seems to me that this thread has almost become a fucking cummunity itself. PHERE: good color scheme, like rolin said, that H is almost an N. I like that fade on the 3d part. makes it look like it really had a light shining back there. fuck, i haven't sketched anything in 2 weeks. anyone has some tips or something to get over this? Watch a graffiti documentary or look through a graffiti magazine, as redundant as that sounds, it works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleazeside Heights Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 New piece, trying smth out with fill-in. I actually like it :P Any crits would be useful, thanks! I would move that I out from under that L, so it doesn't look like a U. looks like it's hiding a bit. colors are good and the fill ain't bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Rolin, you need to work on your R's, they bug me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salesmanoftheyear Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 I'm really feelin' that 1st SOEPA. It reminds me of Garbage Pale Kids or something. Major props! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Rolin - that latest fill-in is proper. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rolin Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Thanks for crits, guys! Soepa: All 3 pieces are good. I really like 3d one. Donald: Nothing really to say, you're better than me. Good job :) Recneps: I'm feelin' the one on the right, keep it up. My entry for Monthly battle on MG. Any crits would be very useful, thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 ROLIN: i like that last sketch, but try to make your R less stiff looking. i wouldn't connect the inclinated bar to the half circle, i'd connect it at the intersection of the vertical and the half circle. what i do sometimes i change bar density in certain areas, but thats just me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Rolin - I like that 3D on the Sprite piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
\>=+-] Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Rolin, you need to work on your R's, they bug me. hahahaha, jerk Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Donald has a point those Rs do look a bit weird, I think it is the way the leg comes off the curve of the R should be more towards the upright leg of the R Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salesmanoftheyear Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 the r's leg should be lowered a bit, i feel like it would look fine then. thanks for the crits, those of you who gave me them... does anyone want to exchange? pm me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted December 16, 2009 Share Posted December 16, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 15 minute job in a friends book Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 Fuckin with Dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 SILBA: you did good in the 1st sketch but your letter structure got all messed up on the 2nd one. that Reke is dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salesmanoftheyear Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 crits. again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 Thanks for crits, guys! Soepa: All 3 pieces are good. I really like 3d one. Donald: Nothing really to say, you're better than me. Good job :) Recneps: I'm feelin' the one on the right, keep it up. My entry for Monthly battle on MG. Any crits would be very useful, thanks! disregard the picture that was attached to my post, i didn't post that. its a ghost attachment, i didnt do whats in that picture hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 It says CrimL. I ran out of room so I just threw the "L" in there. Olde English is pretty tight, I'm gonna do more of these. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 17, 2009 Share Posted December 17, 2009 wow, thats awesome dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rolin Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 Old english are pretty sick ! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dose-ink Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 Bump that CRIMINL throwy, thats fresh man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATSPRAY Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 i'm happy enough wit this since it's kinda a new style Looks good, fix the K a lil Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EYElessthan3CRACK Posted December 18, 2009 Share Posted December 18, 2009 anyone wanna exchange im tryin to get back into writing i write HE ONE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATSPRAY Posted December 19, 2009 Share Posted December 19, 2009 Bad pictures, but you get the idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 19, 2009 Share Posted December 19, 2009 Bump that CRIMINL throwy, thats fresh man. You really think so?.. Thanks, man, I appreciate it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATSPRAY Posted December 19, 2009 Share Posted December 19, 2009 ^ Yea, shits not bad. You west coast CRIMINAL? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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