faze 1 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 -edit- -2R- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 i want criticizm on all these. thanks "SELL UR SOUL 2ROLL" -2R- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phameousONE Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 i like that stright line niner, its looks pretty dope, i would use the center dot 3-d shit, it would make your letters pop. and mabye on your N's, make center skinny line as thick ass the rest. just me though. PEACE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phameousONE Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 oh and monk. i know what the fuck it means buddy, i live 808. ive caught your stickers. haha lates Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phameousONE Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 laa de fuckin da Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cradlespeaks Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 still looking for advice... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suicide Bomber Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Comments plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Leader Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Alright, here we go. Scribble on top of "a" and bots near horizontal bar on "a" --- Make all of your bars the same size at all points. ex: |¯| |_| That would be an "i" .. I'm not going to do letters that are harder than that right now, because I'm not getting paid. Notice how it looks good. A nice straight bar. Now, this can be done with diagonals too of course ex: ./¯/ /_/ And a mix of the two is fine as well. ex: |¯| /_/ You aren't exactly ready for the mix of the 2 or the diagonal yet, I just threw them out there for future reference. Now, check this out, I'm going to do with these exampes, what you are doing with your letters /¯/ |_\ Now, that shit is ugly. Stop doing shit like that. "wtf is this" --- That bar makes your "a" into an "o" with a bar in the middle. You do not need to add extra shit to your letters, you are nowhere near the level of adding extra shit to your letters. I never want to see that shit on your letters again. "you aren't at a level where you can add extra shit, stop" --- Exactly what it says. No more of that shit. "no arrows" --- arrows are also classified as "extra shit" see above for what you need to to do with all this "extra shit" "3d only goes 1 direction at your skill level" --- Here's another example lesson. 3d goes like this: |¯¯¯¯|¯| |____|_| This gives you the perspective of being on the right of the object. ex2: |¯¯¯¯| |____| |____| This gives you the perspective of being on the bottom of the object. (work with me here, I have a limited medium) When you get further down the line and understand how to work perspectives better you can fuck around a bit, but for now your 3d only goes in one direction. be it up, down, left, right, b, a or start. That's about all I have to say other than what I'm about to say. That sentence was useless, and so is this one, but I'm not deleting them. Go simpler. See the font I used in the picture. Try to mimic those letters. And as I've said before, GET FONTS. FONTS ARE YOUR FRIEND. Print the fonts out and study these fucking things. Draw them 100 times over until you are sick of them. And NO, you will not be able to add extra shit after 5 more attempts at drawing your word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Leader Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Everything that you tried was ugly. BLOCK LETTERS MOTHERFUCKERS. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astra Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 phameousONE hey mane i like ur drawing's ... there pretty fresh but ur can need's a lil work.. so just keep practicing mane.. props! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Leader Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Although you are better than the other 2 Astra, You still need to go read my latest lesson thing and follow everything as stated. Just because you are better (not by much) doesn't mean you are on a higher level then the other 2.. because unless you go backwards first, you aren't going to go very far forward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistery Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Astra nice character u need to keep ur letters the same size.. or have a sizing scheme going on.. . so just work on makeing ur letters all the same size first! but i do like ur character... so keep practicing withhim and make him cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 criticizm please and i no i shouldnt of put the arrow there but i did so just ignore it, thanks in advanced -2R- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emergin_graffer Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 what does that say? dont link up your letters. thats all i feel like saying at this moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Leader Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 I can't tell what it says either. I got either nt3t or nt3e Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROYAL808 Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 Originally posted by phameousONE@Mar 28 2005, 12:01 PM here you go nockers. haha ill post finished one in a bit. HAOLE Quoted post is that u? dont look like u invite me 2 ur house n we go paint haole shit man ufa mainlanders Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 Originally posted by The Leader@Mar 30 2005, 01:54 PM I can't tell what it says either. I got either nt3t or nt3e Quoted post it says nine but owell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dead Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 simplify for the minute. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WHERES_BIF? Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 URBA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WHERES_BIF? Posted March 31, 2005 Share Posted March 31, 2005 URBA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeno Posted April 1, 2005 Share Posted April 1, 2005 i write mana now criticize me. all of the work above is mine, the one that says denver harbor is my old hood, the one that says monoxide is the name of my band i practiced with and the ttp one is my "crew" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cradlespeaks Posted April 1, 2005 Share Posted April 1, 2005 god bless u, wee need more people like u...when i finially reach where i want to go..i'll remember u...looking forward for u critiquing more of my work... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted April 2, 2005 Share Posted April 2, 2005 This thread took a drastic downturn in quality, which scares me. I'm going to drink a gallon of everclear right now. WHERE THE FUCK ARE ALL YOUR ARROWS? HAVE YOU LEARNED NO WILDSTYLE GRAFFTAGGING SKILLS FROM ME? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlistaCompact Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 Wow. Gnome are you serious? jeno, your can skillz suck. However, your writing skillz are slightly better. Check out The straight letter thread and practice drawing straight letters. This goes to all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emergin_graffer Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 mono..mana...watever...put the can down. leave it there for a long ass time..and stick to paper.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emergONE Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 ummmmm wtf? name change Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 which is thebetter amongst the three. note: better is a relative term, does not imply that it is actually good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 or what can i work on... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H of BL Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 Originally posted by BlistaCompact@Apr 2 2005, 09:06 PM Wow. Gnome are you serious? Quoted post what do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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