kern Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 crits? the new caps on the elmers spray adhesive are amazing on tall osh cans Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted February 19, 2012 Share Posted February 19, 2012 the T is decent, everything else could use work. although, nice use of space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted February 28, 2012 Share Posted February 28, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted March 1, 2012 Share Posted March 1, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tB0NdCCEeRI&context=C3c79e29ADOEgsToPDskLtghDK2VOuqwyfsJVHrcEm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 jitsu that immabeadaddy piece is fucking dope...just lose that lil extension on teh TS connect (i feel like it is just random compared to teh overall feel of the piece) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 that's lookin' dope, umire. pretty impressed that even with all those extensions it looks really consistent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 4, 2012 Share Posted March 4, 2012 .... show's a hard act to follow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 4, 2012 Share Posted March 4, 2012 umirr, my only crit would be that he S is skinnier than the rest of the letters. Dopeness overall. Props. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted March 4, 2012 Share Posted March 4, 2012 that spot looks dope Umire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 crits welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 8, 2012 Share Posted March 8, 2012 I'd back off the extensions and work on defining letters more. Simplish fills would probably be a good way to go now too, just back off of anything that makes it look muddy if you know what I mean. it kinda lacks flow, once that is found, it's extension time. all opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted March 8, 2012 Share Posted March 8, 2012 he's not wrong. your letters have always been too wobbly. also, stop tilting that A if it's the only one. on a positive note, your fades are coming along nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AZTEKA Posted March 8, 2012 Share Posted March 8, 2012 @ jitsu, mone, and show, dont take this the wrong way, but yall dont belong in this thread, most of us would agree, you guys need to be in the big boy threads. late homies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 a big one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted March 12, 2012 Share Posted March 12, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbasko Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Crits? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I2_IE_I3_IE_IL Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I2_IE_I3_IE_IL Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 rant your fills are on point for the most part. i just think sometimes your A can come off as an E or is just confusing in general thats just my opinion homie but i was diggin the tucan sam for sure. shaws shit looking super crispy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 thanks for the imput guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 i need a better flick of that red one.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja x status Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 .... show's a hard act to follow probably should have made a better attempt to cover up what was under you. its kind of a bad look imo to have fools shit pokin out from under you like that. unless that was your intention. even if its your stuff under it, it looks sloppy when you do that shit. my two main crits would be to make the R bigger so its on par with the other letters and cut that extra bar from your E. the one thats sticking out of its head, it doesn't work well with the piece. keep going though man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abovethefogg Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 can i get some crits on this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted March 25, 2012 Share Posted March 25, 2012 colors no diss man but id think about a diff name. unless ur the writer who came through the d whatup doe lol. but its kinda one of those names that 10 other ppl will have. anywho the overall letters look alright, nothing special. but the e looks big and the d looks squished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 GOD DAMN P'S AND R'S didn't finish the first, not worth it. Felt like going back do super simps because shit looks so wonky, thinking about just doing lines of p's and r's because they take away from the effect so damn much. hopefully in 30 cans this won't look so disgusting. posting for shits and giggles. I agree with the dude who doesn't like shit poking out from underneath but I'm really just trying to practice form right now, and it's on the back of my own barn so whatever. Big bump to Rebel, I remember seeing so much of your stuff on pg when I started, and always dug it, when I stopped checking pg you hadn't posted in forever and I was afraid you were done or something, good to see ya in bidness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 like the naked throw humor toss by centrysams, on Flickr humor by centrysams, on Flickr humor toss by centrysams, on Flickr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 Humr just make sure your throws don't get too busy, it's more of an issue on the whole name toss ups than these. you got some good stuff going though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted March 31, 2012 Share Posted March 31, 2012 same shit different day but slightly lesser crits welcome on the multicolor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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