Monestar Posted May 18, 2012 Share Posted May 18, 2012 Very Wonky Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 but a different from normal flow. It'll look good once it gets a little more thought/practice. If you do it again soon you should try to come up with something to do with the top of the m..but uhhh you probably knew that hahaha I can't even try to critique such better quality work. but that N is pretty hilarious Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walid Jumblat Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 Very Wonky the N looks a bit like a kick ass W. Not sure why you're posting in this thread, dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 I see that lol. The M's style is just a flipped up N Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 BAZE ONE by ...BZ, on Flickr Compare with above throwie... can control... also theres a sketch of this on the flickr to compare. Crits needed, even just what im doing right. Everyone looks good on this page too.. HU, yes bring the U's bottom bar down. the 1st was nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Shitty flicks but wanted to keep the thread moving... ahh another piece ruined by bullshit sekt adapters, poor technique, and hand cramps and before you crit the second I didn't finish it, got tired of all of the above Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 wall i did at a festival thing, my space was really narrow, tried kind incorporating the blue from the guy next to me in the character Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 19, 2012 Share Posted June 19, 2012 Sir alts I'm surprised to see you posting in the toy thread. So I'm slowly progressing but I'm still not getting totally solid letters in(though I usually don't really have anything in mind with some lettters) which kinda sucks. Can control is getting there but my fingy keeps getting tired then it starts to hurt and my hand shakes and it goes all to hell by the time im halfway through the outline. does this happen to other folk? I tried using pink dots instead of ny fats but they don't do too well on sekts also, did I fuck up on the shadow at the lower half of the e? I seriously can't even tell, dunno why. It made sense when I did the shadow but when I came back to do highlights I couldn't figure out where a highlight would make sense on the bar, it was weird. I'm about to cut that god damn tree down Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 nearly negged you for saying fingy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 haha red loves the negs /nh Yea I post my painted stuff in here because i still have a long way to go with my paint, always notice areas to correct (like the L) or places where everything could just be cleaner. Did this today about 3 hours in total i think sper i'd bolden your outlines and dont say fingy, although my fingertip has now been numb for 6 hours after painting today hahah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SureisShitty Posted June 20, 2012 Share Posted June 20, 2012 I said it in humor, as I assumed someone would say quit bitchin about your finger. Sarcasm fellows sarcasm. But then again I did say fingy.....I also said zine...fuck oh well Good to know about the outlines, they do get skinny in places I think it's because I'm afraid if I slow down and make them fatter I'll get a wobbly line in and do even more damage to it. I see what you mean with the l....maybe if you didn't split it(or at least made the split smaller) and leaned it farther towards the right? I do dig that s though, excluding the last two feet of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted June 21, 2012 Share Posted June 21, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 23, 2012 Share Posted June 23, 2012 yeah, sarcasm doesn't translate in text, i laughed though so it's all good. Alts, i say tone it down just a bit honestly. I haven't been painting much at all these days, so take it or leave it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 dunno if i should post this in here, looks ok but some glaring mistakes geargraff dont make the letters so fat and horribly generic, do some clean straight letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 ^^^Get out of the toy thread you nut Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 DIOS Its not finished Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 you're missing hella 3d son haha. i'd say go back and fix it but im guessing the train already left. and i think you should have gave it a force field, would have came out even cleaner. maybe like a green or something.idk i suck with color combos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEPx Posted June 27, 2012 Share Posted June 27, 2012 CRITS ON ANYTHING WOULD BE SO HELPFUL Untitled by cbrow124, on Flickr Untitled by cbrow124, on Flickr Untitled by cbrow124, on Flickr 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Hay MONE you need to change your name. Its already exist a MONE and its much older than you see the attached link Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 monestar is from the states, other guy is from Hungary. I don't think it matters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Man it matters a lot. Sorry :( come on, be respectful........... we make part from the same community Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 this guy has been writing mone for quite a few years as well. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeadingEdge Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Names are a bitch if someone else has one, just add a number and no one will complain, ain't that hard. -Alts, that is a solid,good piece man. Only things you need to work on is maybe less extensions (some seem really random), and getting your lines clean and not shaky. What helped me out was looking where my line will go, instead of watching it as i paint to make sure it's clean. To clarify, just be confident in your strokes and don't over-think it. Keeping a rhythm helps too. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeadingEdge Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 Sir alts I'm surprised to see you posting in the toy thread. So I'm slowly progressing but I'm still not getting totally solid letters in(though I usually don't really have anything in mind with some lettters) which kinda sucks. Can control is getting there but my fingy keeps getting tired then it starts to hurt and my hand shakes and it goes all to hell by the time im halfway through the outline. does this happen to other folk? I tried using pink dots instead of ny fats but they don't do too well on sekts also, did I fuck up on the shadow at the lower half of the e? I seriously can't even tell, dunno why. It made sense when I did the shadow but when I came back to do highlights I couldn't figure out where a highlight would make sense on the bar, it was weird. For one, ya talk a lot kid... Secondly, hand fatigue happens, (mainly to those who don't paint ever). Paint every few days, and it goes away as your hand gets stronger. I have a callus in a circular shape on my index finger from NY fats. If you get fatigue, switch fingers(or hands). I usually use my middle finger and thumb for fills, and index for outline. Giving up at the end of a piece really destroys the whole outcome, so stay focused. If you want better letters, draw more! I use Rusto, and sekt adapters with an NY fat are pretty much all I use(lots of writers use this combo). Try and not think about how clean stuff is, just do it fast and steady and it'll come out clean with practice. I'd simplify the E, and keep that bottom bar uniform instead of flared. Keep the E's structure like a 3 instead of it getting broken into bars that barely connect at the bottom. The 3d and control need work, and I'd keep the S smooth and uniform, instead of making it narrow where the bars connect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazeoner93 Posted June 28, 2012 Share Posted June 28, 2012 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
you can microwave bacon Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 LOL damn her left breast hasn't developed yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monestar Posted June 29, 2012 Share Posted June 29, 2012 Hay MONE you need to change your name. Its already exist a MONE and its much older than you see the attached link That is "Mone78" I have him on Facebook also lol. And he is not the first "MONE" Either hense the name Mone78 There is a Mone that writes out of New York that is ancient in the Graff world that has actually confronted me on here. I know I am not the first Mone but I look at style rather than what Artists call there selves... At this point in time all the names have to be taken For instance There is a Pose1 and a Pose2 even know Pose2 was most likely the name bearer of Pose longer than Pose from Chicago. Style matters Peace @Romero- The train left within 8 minutes of me starting the piece I ran to get a flick while some dude was walking towards me lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted July 1, 2012 Share Posted July 1, 2012 BAZE by ...BZ, on Flickr BZ by ...BZ, on Flickr HOES ESB by ...BZ, on Flickr hoes is the homie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted July 2, 2012 Share Posted July 2, 2012 BIG MAMA BEACH BAR:lol: :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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