vare_one Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 zero talent thast why im posting in here bugsy if u do read the thread name it does say TOYS POST HERE so thats wht im doing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluprint Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 I'm posting my sketches here because I want help, man. I WANT to get better, so I'm posting to get advice from better writers. So chill. If you don't wanna see "Toy" shit, then don't come in the thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 Apostle I think what he's saying is that you need to be sketching quite a bit more before your shit is ready for this site. You're already doing simples, but sketch for another month or so and then post something a bit more refined so that more constructive criticism can be offered. Right now there are so many things wrong that it is really hard to do much else than insult it. If you've got any degree of artistic talent in you you'll know when something looks good or bad, if you think its bad in any way just don't bother posting it here. You won't get any useful information out of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluprint Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 Cool, I gotcha. You better be ready for some posts from me in a while guys. Haha :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
duct Posted December 14, 2004 Share Posted December 14, 2004 can some one please forget everyone else ans give me a idea of how far ive come with my sketches now thank you very very very much !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spellbound Posted December 14, 2004 Share Posted December 14, 2004 ^^^DUCT not too bad...looks like you're on the right track with the simples. I would say...get rid of all your connections...not really ready for that yet. stick to only two colors. make sure your bars are a consistent width. and work on a simple drop shadow. Keep a steady hand and a critical eye. hope that helps. Also...seg...not bad...just get rid of all that tall shit and low shit on your letters let them be on their own and they're not too bad. peace oh and seg watch the middle bar of your E...kinda looks goofy peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOB_BROKE Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 feedback is appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 duct, honestly u've come along way the simples look good, my advice now you have that down work on youre fills grab some pencils start doin fades n such or add detail into youre skectch like a dripping outline or bubbles.. but dude youre doing well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 to clear up what i was saying...apostle work on more structure and gnometoys got it in one what i was trying to say.. and that some people that are producing sum nice stuff in this thread are recieving critisim from people that really lack you know what im saying, like heres a tip, if u urself are not as good as the person posting flicks then insted of giving critisism they probably dont need just leave it and let the more experienced people tell them whats the go... Chelk Oner.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 .. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 .. most of the stuff im postin is crap and old but ah well.. can you guys post up your tags? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 yeha boi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 dont write invade random word not colored n dont write runci either jus ma name... eny critique gd or bad welcome.... runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnomeToys Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 I like that second one, although the U is close to reading as a W for me. Either way, I like it. Somebody is going to bitch at you for all the extensions but I think they're swell. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 Ehh fanks 4 the quik response.... The second one is just a new style i was muckin about with.... Ill work on them n post back...but for just now heres some more (not so good) don't write dare don't write tumo either.. Runci Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 and another skecth in that same style.... eny critique welcome.... don't write zade...seem to be sayin that alot ;) runci... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onthelam Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 you folks need to realize that if ur juss starting u need to work on ur basics like in anything else....people that have never busted a can shot on the streets should not be trying to do pieces on paper...the easiest way to get good is practice ur tag all the fucking time and try using other peoples letters and change them to fit into your word but start off simple and then do more compex after prolly more then a year you will have a tag that might not make good writers vomit and after about 2 years your handstyle should be good enough to put up...dont try and rock fills or pieces yet but juss get ur word out there and recognized so people will see it....then once ur hands are good(simple letters can be much better then a failed attempt at complex ones) then start to do simple buble letter hollows and develop on that and once you start to paint in chill spots and do pieces and shit do it frequently and push your style and make the style you take from the shit you see and make it into your own so that no matter what word your write in a tag hollow fill piece or whatever make it so that people who can identify that thats you because u have a unique enough style...at this point is where u have earned respect and ur recognition will go up the more you bomb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOB_BROKE Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 my bad, my image was broken feedback plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOB_BROKE Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 my toy handstyle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOB_BROKE Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 aww man they both broken welll sorry heres the links tho http://free.hostultra.com/~ageronimo/graff/mob.jpg http://free.hostultra.com/~ageronimo/graff/handstyle1.jpg feedback plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astra Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 Any Feedback/Criticism for my work? Its on page 53, please I want to know if the progress I'm seeing is valid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metropolitanmayhem Posted December 17, 2004 Share Posted December 17, 2004 here ya go Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MOB_BROKE Posted December 19, 2004 Share Posted December 19, 2004 feedback plz sorry for the quality Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AmoNG Posted December 19, 2004 Share Posted December 19, 2004 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted December 20, 2004 Share Posted December 20, 2004 here are sum new styles... dont write either of them... never steven the pics r blurry but am waitin to get ma scanner fixed.. runci... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apex Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v169/my_...ou/scan0001.jpg thats a stamp i made http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v169/my_.../art/indian.jpg some shiat http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v169/my_...ou/art/skel.jpg more http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v169/my_...u/art/skel2.jpg last im more into street art. i'd like to throw these up somewhere, would you recommend me paint these on plywood first and screw them into poles or walls or should i just paint them on the spot? sorry if the pics are blurred Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
docs Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 ^^ nice apex Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apex Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 im glad you like. feedback appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
emergin_graffer Posted December 21, 2004 Share Posted December 21, 2004 accident.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted December 22, 2004 Share Posted December 22, 2004 heres one from earlier Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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