Bluprint

Hey guys. Been workin' on a new name. Lets hear your comments.

Can I have some feedback on this? I've been workin on some simples. Upper case and lower case.

I can assure you that I did not bite it off anyone. 1. I have no idea who Buik is, 2. Biting is gay, and I dont do it. Although, Ill take that as a compliment, saying that my OWN work looks like another writer's (Probably good writer) work. But can I get some criti. please?

Demur1, Lose the weird leg on the R and dont have the leg come out farther than the top bubble. The other letters are alright. But fix that R

Well I write deus from Deuce which means "2". Its just my number in anything I do haha. Like sports n shit.

Hey guys, I'm back. got a few sketches. Lets see what you guys think. In order from oldest to newest. Criticism please.

HOT CAR Haha, oh .. and nice sticker :haha:

Cool, I gotcha. You better be ready for some posts from me in a while guys. Haha :D

I'm posting my sketches here because I want help, man. I WANT to get better, so I'm posting to get advice from better writers. So chill. If you don't wanna see "Toy" shit, then don't come in the thread.

I like the last one to the right, really clean and good colors.

I like this one a lot! Nice jobbbb

This is my newest piece. And personally, my favorite out of all my stuff so far. What does everyone think about it?

Hahha Prolly would, wouldnt doubt it. I never said I was good man, get off my back. I'm just saying that seeing shit like Angry Kids stuff from his other forums that I saw would make kids wanna write.

I dont agree at all man. Out of the all the people around where I live, I know one other person that writes. ONE. My city has a population of like 25,000 That makes TWO people. Maybe its like that in the states or something, but here in Canada, its not the same, eh. (well that I know for.) Anyway, I think its a good thing that more people are getting in to it, because for all you know, they coulda saw your stuff somewhere and said "Hey, that looks awesome. I wanna try it." Its just the look of graffiti that attracts youth and sometimes older people. The more the merrier. Hahaha

I like the paper bag guy and the guy with the funny teeth Haha And that last one (colored) is sweet man. Props

Your stuff is mad man! Props go to you, for sure. And don't be so negative to yourself, you got talent.

Thanks iloveboxcars for the constructive criticism and for you, Earo35, heres a big FUCK YOUIf you ain't got nuthing but negative things to say, shut your pie hole, bitch.

Hello? Is anybody out there?

Seano, Your a nut. Hahaha, Your chars. are sick! I like the guy on the duck with the beer. Its deadly.

I think I'm gunna post my shit in this thread instead of throwin down another one. Hahaha. Comments n stuff. Character I came up with. Comments? Constructive Criticism? Lets hear it.

Can anyone help me out here or what? Does anybody even read this forum? I spose I'll make a new thread then. I ain't gettin the amount of advice I was hopin' for. If y'all can help me out, I'd be grateful

A new name I came up with. I'm experimenting with names. Comments please. A character I came with. Expect improvements. Haha. I'm hoping someone can point out some mistakes or hand out a tip or two.

Did it for my girl. Comments? Criticism? Let me know

Yeah, I just tried to start simple and go with Block letters, then tried to add some sort of thing to it so it just doesnt look dumb, never came out as good as I was hoping, but thanks. And that pic is RAD Haha :king: