Darkeist Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 hmm could you do an example ms paint maybe idc whatevers easiest. because that made no sense. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 Feed back please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 kiloz, the T is a little complicated with all those bits, and if i didn't know the W was a W, i'd think it was an H. i like that E a lot. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 is this lame?? its not a sketch on whitline paper, its actually in a medium most of u never make it too.. im just tryin to tell these lil homies if ur gonna do it, do it wit some respect on a real pad. christmas is comiin... u guys know wat to ask for. oh... and that last radar is fresh! just unconnect the top of the A to the R and thats a keeper!! theres some positivity! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 kiloz, the T is a little complicated with all those bits, and if i didn't know the W was a W, i'd think it was an H. i like that E a lot. You have been prop'ed along with anyone else who critiques my letters, I am trying to build a strong alphabet so be has harsh as you want. Thank you my ounceRZ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jm918 Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 is this lame?? its not a sketch on whitline paper, its actually in a medium most of u never make it too.. im just tryin to tell these lil homies if ur gonna do it, do it wit some respect on a real pad. christmas is comiin... u guys know wat to ask for. oh... and that last radar is fresh! just unconnect the top of the A to the R and thats a keeper!! theres some positivity! This Is Very Nice! The Letters Could Use A Bit More Work, But That Fill Is On Point! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunkOne Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 umm crits? ignore the character :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 euro not bad radar dope jeg gay fill but clean cats bustin out whiteline paper?? step ur pad game up bump lined paper 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roke Reserve Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 shits ill ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 aint nothing toy bout that, bump aspek Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 bordum at its finest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 really like the simplicity of your letters, aspek. bump that first one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 i personally would say, its about whats on the paper not the type of paper. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nickfury Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 Jeg, you can paint, but your letters are wack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 Suuup freakeenyc~! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 Kilo, one bad thing about the majority of the letters is that none of the bars are really connected, but I'm assuming that you're going to do something about that eventually...If not, you should. A - The middle bar is awkward. Too thick I think. The top of the A seems too thin. The two bottom extensions is weird. B - Theres something about the top left of the B...I don't know what though. Besides that, I really like it. C - There's too much empty space. Try making the bottom bar a little longer, and have it come back up. Also, do one of those kick up things on the top...If you know what I mean D - Love it. Maybe make the top right just a wee bit thicker. E - <3 F - Just clean it up and it's illy G - I wouldn't have the middle bar go through to the left side of it. Also, make the bar that goes from the bottom of the backbone to the middle bar thicker. H - Pretty sick. Make the top right a wee bit thicker too. I - Rework it... J - Take away the bits, and maybe just make the whole letter a little wider. K - Almost awesome. Make the bar from the upper right bar to the middle bar a little thicker. Maybe make the backbone a little thinner. Also, try adding an extension off the bottom left of the backbone. L - Maybe make the bottom a little thicker. M - It feels too cramped. N -I like it. Maybe add a small extension to the left off the bottom of the backbone. O - It's shaped kinda weird. Maybe try reworking it. P - Dope. Again, maybe an extension to the left off the bottom of the backbone. Q - Sick. Make the crossover thing a little thicker maybe. R - The top feels a little too thick and cramped. Also, try the same extension off the bottom left of the backbone. S - I'd say rework it to make it work with the rest of the style. Like, I like it, it's just really different from all of the other letters. T - Really weird. Try reworking it. U - Awkward and small...Try widening up the entire letter and making the bottom bar thicker. V - I dig it. W - Make the bars from the bottom to the middle bar thicker, and it'll be ill. X - One of the best X's I've seen. Just maybe try making the top right a little further to the right. Y - Doesn't really look like a Y...Might just be because the middle bar isn't actually connected anywhere. It almost resembles a K right now. And redo the bottom. Make it thicker and more slanted Z - Try doing the bottom right like the bottom right of the L. Just my 2 cents. Take it, leave it, take some, it's whatever. I like your style. Got any own name pieces to post? I've probably seen some, just haven't noticed. Good job on this shit though man. Amef - Fix the M and A, and clean everything up. Aspek, keep the middle bars of all of your letters on the same level. Sunk and Jeg, keyboard letters. Please and thank you. Radar, dopeness. Keep it up. Can I get some crits, and also some ideas as to what to do for a background? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 YO EONS, I LIKE YOUR STYLE. AND YEAH KILOZ I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE THA Y I DON'T THINK THA END NEEDS TO BE BROUGHT UP SO HIGH, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 aspek i diddnt forget you homie im just a little bit of a burn out Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 good shit mate thanks. i like the a. pe is maybe a bit squished though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 nice stuff saltine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 ^ cool talk br0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 quick sketch changed the a an m for yetsio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 your handstyle reads amek to me, and your M is still pretty messed up, looks more like a W Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 thats cuz the star do dad came close to it and yea im about fit to be fucking tide with the m, thats why i always just throw up the ef Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 look at some throwys and understand how M's work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 Never do a 2 letter just because your letters are challenging. Only way to get better is practice. Simple is better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 lol i luv the hate! the island of misfit toys....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 HA^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 nice stuff saltine any crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted December 17, 2010 Share Posted December 17, 2010 jeg you took it kinda like a man at first, but you're way too arrogant for real. do you not see the bullshit that is your structure? the random juts and go-nowhere extensions? you are crazy trash, and no k00l f1ll br0 will make up for that... and no full white "OG GRAFF N DANCE WHITE PAD BLACKBOOK" is going to make your sketches nice. grab a notebook and DO SIMPLES! (btw i do and am not dope or claiming by any means) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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