DakuOne Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 first is hella old, second is recent with a grog squeezer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 Very, very nice improvements, Radar! Seriously, bro! Keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 that right there is why you shouldn't be handing out advice daku... those tags are horrible they are way over the top in the worst way while on the other hand radar's tag is simple and to the point yea its not a crazy philly tag or something over the top like that but it is also not pretending to be something its not radar keep it up man you are going to be killing it here soon daku... if anything you should be learning from radar not trying to give him advice on things you dont understand yet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 More NOE. About as simple as i think i can get. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 radar keep working on those hands. try to get each letter even and let them flow into each other. the first ones the best the last one goes sideways on the last two letters. theyre not bad, keep at it and the style will come dont try and force it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havok Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 radar what i would do is spread your letters a tad bit and take advantage of the caps your using... daku just try to write your name like you would normally your style and flow of a hand comes from your actual penmanship... think like bubbly and girly but still gutter and dirty... and dont do those hearts there is no love in that for you yet... newest thing ive done in awhile and it aint nothing different... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pos Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 just some ideas lately. I don't really dig the one straight but the last one is cool If i straighten up and shade it a little more correctly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 radar - as said, the first one is the best... daku - go way simpler, as was said... noe - nice black fingernail polish br0, haha... seriously those are a lot better, i like the 3rd one down the best, but i also have a somewhat similar style to that i guess so i dont know... id keep workin with those simples and slowly expand on them... pos - you need consistancy! keep doing simples, you need the practice so that your lines will be cleaner, your letters will be evenly spaced, etc... and i cant crit your hands cause i hate most philly hands anyway... also, can anyone help me out with any crits/advice on my previous post? (and im not zorb unfortunately, haha, its an exchange... ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 @ zorb...i feel like the top zorb is better than the middle one cuz of the B...and also the R looks more established...where as the middle one may be mistaken as a P.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 is that zorb part of an exchange? There is a dope and affiliated zorb around my neck of the woods... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 ahah founda 2003 sketch.. http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z284/ltsgt2/Tagz%20done%20by%20da%20freak/7862.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 HOW OLD WERE YOU THEN?" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 haha early highschool i think..yeaa i cant explain the character... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 ha ha. freak that's awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 thanks freak, i did the middle one first and tried to improve some on the top one, but still dont quite like it... think the middle one may be better if i thinned the circular loop on the B (kinda like how the pen inside it is) i feel this would balance out the piece more, and yeah, maybe define that r leg better... do think this would improve it or is there another direction im completely overlooking? and yeah redeye thats an exchange w/ that zorb... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted December 11, 2010 Share Posted December 11, 2010 Orlando battle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 Only Jordan's I would ever wear! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 DOPE BUT WHY? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 why what? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 THEY'RE THA ONLY JORDANS YOU'D ROCK. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjKeNNyKiLoz Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 alright maybe I would do the number 8's but I only like 4's and 8's. I think the rest are all ugly, no offense to any one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 YEAH I GOT A PAIR OF BUTTERFLIES. THEY'RE DOPE. BUT NIKES ARE BETTER. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umnoid Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 just some ideas lately. I don't really dig the one straight but the last one is cool If i straighten up and shade it a little more correctly. NOOOO!!! stop doing things Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 ^ :rolleyes: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 haha early highschool i think..yeaa i cant explain the character... HE'S A FREAK WITH HIS HANDS IN HIS PANTS I GET IT. HAHAHAHA! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 eons? you need to work on letter structure and your handstyle. if you get that down itd be dope. its clean and the 3d is perfect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 I agree. That N is busted. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 very clean res4, just did this im bored as hell needs work and 3d for sure... and perhaps some microns that are not on there last leg... :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted December 12, 2010 Share Posted December 12, 2010 Yeah, that N is fucked. but besides that, the structure is still on, unless I'm blind.. I sketched a better N in the sketch I recently started. So whenever I get around to inking that I'll post up. Aspek, work on your flow and watch the widths of your letters. They vary way too much. Anef? Do simples.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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