Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 Fresh! So howcome youve been posting bs up till now? Just to keep us guessing? Jk bro. Seriiously im feelin that shit. Except the an connection on the last one. And the throws are solid but all of those letters have been used by multiple people, not callin u a biter just sayin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 Also the first one is the best imo and i woulda fattened up the lower left parf if the s in the old english piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 The first is my fave too, plan on painting it this weekend. On the old english, I sort of see what you mean but not so much? Haha And the connection oh god, I've been trying to work with them more but I'm still trying to develop the actual flow of em but thanks. And thethrows, god yes EVERYONE uses that style aand I know its so overrated but fuckit its just a throw, thanks for the crits though spawn. Anyone else, I'm welcome to all crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 what about behind instead of in front? And thats kinda what i meant but the old eng piece. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 Also some food for thought for the piece with the connection, all the attention is drawn to the o because of the a and n creating that symetry just leaves your s out to dry. And the connection is the only part of the piece that is over or underlapping if ya get me. Try to make more overlapping or none because just the one spot is kinda weird imo. I love overlapping shit but i try to spread it out more evenly, but thats just me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasc-One Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 One of my first posts on this site my last post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 stayposi that first sketch is loose, definently paint it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 Haha ill make sure to post a flick on this and the toy paint thread after I do. Hopefully it comes out as nice as the sketch, hopefully BETTER!!(: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 SAON coming back with some heat, nice work. Crits plz: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tha whut Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 ur A and I look good but ur others dont look that well with that kind of style shudved done a lowercase y Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 I cant seem to get a nice style in my lowercase Y... fuckin annoying. Think its all a bit squashed on the left side too compared to the A and I. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 jerk that is the best thing ive seen from you, imo its funny seeing peoples ages, when theyre so far from what you expected. haha im 14 and i started when i was 13, i did not expect zomb to be 23, i thought he was a teenager damn im 33 :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 only thing hip about me is my dodgy one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mason YoshiKami Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 XD XD XD XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d a m a g e Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 Im very happy with this. I dont know if I should define the letters where they connect incase I ruin it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted August 31, 2011 Share Posted August 31, 2011 The emc on the other one looks nice too. Trace it dude. Then you can do it and still have the original Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d a m a g e Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 The emc on the other one looks nice too. Trace it dude. Then you can do it and still have the original Oh no need to trace, it bled through to the next page perfectly haha Good idea, sure have a look at this as well Tried several times to work out an R for it and Im still not happy with it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 Not bad that def has potential. Not that you asked lol but what i dont like is how the e's have vertical lines, it stops the flow. And the top left of the r that line is too long imo and clashes with the flow. The leg on the r or at least where it bends is too low and the r looks. Really top heavy. Put a hole in there maybe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eattingsnowflakes Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 ....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 before after Crits??? the 3-d is horrendous Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a mutant rancor Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 yokai digging that sketch the Y is the best IMO but the first leg of the A needs to be a little narrower, bring that o out a little more to Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 With you on all that bro. ty. Work on ure letter thicknesses, they arent very consistent. Like the top of ure E and the legs of ure R. In fact the R in general needs some TLC. keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 the I is a little big :/ shall i keep workin these shapes? or try something else? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerk666ems Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 the I is a little big :/ shall i keep workin these shapes? or try something else? the i is a little big, but besides that i think it's dope. steadily getting better man just keep at it, you're starting to get that style down pretty decent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiReZ_CUKkrew Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 before after Crits??? the 3-d is horrendous looks good, but make the 3d a little bigger IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerk666ems Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 before after Crits??? the 3-d is horrendous IMO the s should sit behind the r at the top,instead of the 3d going over the r it should go behind it but that's just me though. the 3d's right, but it could use a little straightening out. and letter thickness try and make all your letters the same thickness. sweet name though and it really don't look that bad. just keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destillery Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 so rusty... tryna get back in the swing of things 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pertplus1 Posted September 1, 2011 Share Posted September 1, 2011 thats dope Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 3 layer Silent Hill nurse stencil. (I shouldn't have used yellow lol, should have used something darker.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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