Kasc-One

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Can i get some critss for my last post

redid this kline heres one for speaker2 its kinda light, i might o over the lines so you can see it better

perts

nah not kasc, KLINE and @freak i doubt i could rock a perfect one but i think i can do one, i'll try to post one later today

pretty good, the only advice i have is to make the e consistent with the rest of the piece by making the bars a little wider... dope altogether, wanna exchange ?

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here you go verse, sorry i took so long a quickie i did in physics

Hey forcefield di you finish the adveentures of upbot book, yet i used to love that shit, i would like to see the finished product

The word in your username means "the"

STEELERNATION

i'll exchange with you, i write kline Can i get some crits on my shit ?

kline

Justin Sane/Easy gmv

sev = definitely not toy

Dude just take the criticism and dont be an asshole... thats the only way your gonna get anywhere here and as far as letters go xoxox is pretty skilled n/h

yeaa buddy

christo

in no way am i trying to discriminate,

Vader vs Hitler Hitlers reaction

word^^ i feel like money should get knocked off his horse but i want him to face pac-man so im very conflicted, hopefully pac-man will destroy him if he beats ortiz

true, one of my favorites tpbm loves there job

Hey im trying and ive been writing seriously since since may of this year about a month before i joined the website, and in all fairness ive seen SOME progression, im not sayin im a nice ass writer, im still very toy but the only crits i give is the ones i hear other writers give. just passin on information Nd thanks naivile , any more crits??

new name, new shit

here ya go saon, experimented like this one except for the opening in the n and the hieght difference Kason simpl