SPEAKBTK Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 thanks for the crits. I like the repetition though, I guess I gotta find a way to make it flow more naturally. how about the other stuff? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 um, for the simple, you're prolly tired of hearing this, but make your letters outta bars when you're first starting out. it really helps your shit line up right. and remember to keep them the same size and parallel to themselves. as for the hand, scrap that and just write your name in your own handwriting as neat as possible and go from there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 this is pretty old but i felt compelled to post something since the shit i did today needs to be redone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 nice improvements Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 SIMPLES. crits, good and bad 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 THOSE ARE A LOT BETTER. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 those are pretty good simples, bro Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 thanks. anything specific I need to work on? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 The best thing to do now is repetition. Practice practice practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 thanks. anything specific I need to work on? practice the simples and try adding them extensions... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 dont add extensions yet until you have your simples down pretty good. thats what i did at least.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReackOne Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 I was talking about simple extensions, not arrows comming out of fucking everywhere :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 filling up this page nother little banger Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 now i need new decos Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 if everyone ignores my stuff, does it mean i should just fuck off? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 make people notice it then... put some color, do differnt styles,etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted December 18, 2010 Share Posted December 18, 2010 dry wretch , nice but make it more legible Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 needs proportion work, ie the d cut-in/swirl... r/n connection too low, throws it off balance, and the e should connect more clearly at the top imo.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 That's an a, I believe. Dumb it down, dry wretch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SONolAR187 Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 bad graffiti stick to stencils you will never be good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted December 19, 2010 Share Posted December 19, 2010 That's an a, I believe. Dumb it down, dry wretch. nah, its a d. and thanks, sneekatoke, for well, legit crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 radar: looks dope.. speak: them simps are phresh... play around with the spacing and dont be afraid to have them overlappin completely.. mosk: not really feelin the bottom two.. dry wrench: i agree with hippos comment.. you gotta put some more time into it and ink it to bring some attention to it... i cant really read it that well if its just a sketch.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 ^nice and romero i would try and avoid posting your face lol hands are straight tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 thanks.and i didnt think you could get a good enough view of my face from that pic.other than my race and the fact i wear glasses yyou wouldn be able to recognize me on the skreets. idk im still feelin like their kinda weak so im gonna keep practicing for a while... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 GOOD JOB PHERE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 thanks.and i didnt think you could get a good enough view of my face from that pic.other than my race and the fact i wear glasses yyou wouldn be able to recognize me on the skreets. idk im still feelin like their kinda weak so im gonna keep practicing for a while... naw i know i was just bein a bustin balls not tryin to be a dick does that say sasquatch farts btw? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 Phere, I think you're better off sticking with PHERE as your tag name; you've really mastered it in the past, and in my opinion, your work with BYES isn't as smooth as your work with PHERE. I'm not saying it isn't a nice sketch, because it is, but I don't feel that it's as nice as your work used to be... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 PHERE AREN'T YOU ON PURE G TOO? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 virtue: you havnt seen nothin yet.. i just posted a simple since it was the toy forum... mass graff: yeah.. but i stopped postin there cuz i got alot of help in toy forum on 12oz.. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 20, 2010 Share Posted December 20, 2010 my last two pieces.. minor x byest collab.. i changed my name cuz i my exchange pieces where comin out better than my phere pieces.. so i was hopin if i changed it again i would progress much faster cuz truth be told i ran out of P and H ideas... lol.. also.. big ups to Alts, Shaken, Redeye and everyone else who helped me shape my style here on 12oz over the years... 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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