Dry Wretch

drowning fish? is that you?

where the fuck is the edit button on this shit

outline from like a year ago

i haven't drawn anything in mad long

wow what an awful word

disregard the gang shit, i been listening to too much chicago shit

outlines cause i'm bored

i really like this one, i would just lose the negative space in the n and flatten out it's top though like this

the second one on the last page of the red marker is sick

wow, if you're who i think you are, then you've come a REALLY long way. like holy shit.

probably shouldn't write serch^

this is fucking sick, i just think the spine of the l is really thick and plain in comparison to the rest of the letters. and i think the e would look better if you made the top of it like the wisp on the top of the w

i like your style.

in the top one, the d is a little too busy compared to the rest of the letters, and you should probably try making the bottom of it more like the c dont really like the way the bottom of the spine on the r sorta just curves up like that. i dont think it fits with the rest of the letters. you need to work on proportion, like where the spine of the r joins the leg/head is way too wide compared to everything else and you need to work on consistency with your extensions/serifs/whatever. like, one shouldn't end in one type of point/curl and another in a different type, if that makes since. bottom one is dope. still needs tweaking, though.

good, bad, retarded connections? what? tell me something, dudes

but... these aren't bad? and stop trying to fling shit at people whenever they give you advice. just because you might not think they're as good as you, doesn't mean they can't be right.

just take it back to the basics, dude. there's no way to salvage this shit.

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