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Decyferon Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 workin on extensions and making letters be able to stand alone... fucked the fill up and went with it anyway. I can see what you are attempting, keep practising. Try thinking of some of the extensions as additional bars to the letters and some more finer ones to connect. I would lose the real curved style in the extensions and make them more jaggedy and sharp, almost like they are mimicking the choppiness of the letter E and work how they will flow into the next letter. If the letter is to sit alone then don't have the extensions frame it, use it as a chance for the letter to be exploding out almost Shaken, try working out how that connection is gonna move onto the K, it flows from the S to the N then just stops would have looked good flowing through the whole thing, maybe try and make the other letters have a lettle more flow to them rather than kinda sitting upright, but dope nonetheless. Rait - do some straight letters, don't make them real curvy and don't make the letters so high when they are so narrow, try and make it a bit beefier. Zid - I think the A is far too big and chunky in comparison to the other letters, I would have preferred them to be more uniform rather than slopping up to the middle and back down, that looks cool in a 3D style but in those letters it looks a bit weird proportionally for me. damn an essay for a crit, at least I didn't say go simple haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
...RA... Posted February 26, 2010 Share Posted February 26, 2010 well here goes another one, just trying different shit. critique away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organic Therapy Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 Did this about a two weeks ago. I know there's a lot of negative space in between the C and S. I've kind of fixed that. About two weeks ago. This is the most recent. A "collab" with my friend EGZY and I. Mine turned out slanted and shaky, but whatever. I should have taken my time. Bump from middle of argument two pages ago. Crits por favor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xaaronx Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 awesome, man. for sure. nice use of colors. i always try to do pieces like that but i just can't ever think of good color combos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 Rait - All of your letters the same width and height. Maybe draw a rectangle as a guide. Every bar needs to be the same width. Look at the left leg of the R. It's twice as fat as the T. Should it be? No connection on the A and I, and if you're drawing upper case letters, do an upper case I as well. Take off the extensions on the T. Look at your keyboard. Block letters are good to practice, but keyboard letters are not exactly block letters. You basically need to work on keeping everything straight and consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 anything? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 DOODLE: the throwie just needs some practice, but whats up with the simples below? it looks like if you didn't really sketch out the bars to make them similar in width. besides, don't extend the V's bar to much because it can almost read YEDO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 yeah the bars are all fucked up, but thanks, ill just keep sketchin, take a little more time next time to actually get the widths right! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted February 27, 2010 Share Posted February 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 the amount of joy you can have a with a bic hey ^^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 that Parsly is hot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 not sure whereelse to put these, so imma put up some of the work in the exchange book. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 i guess watch the height of ur letters and the widths. seems like they both increase as u move towards the right. ie the Ms longer then teh u and the us longer then the m. and the m is way wider than the rest of the other letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 Wage's sick 3d status Satire!! FREAK TMW more coming.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 ALTS TMW [first ones a collab] RUCK TMW more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 haha dope man like seeing my older stuff, I always liked that brown n yellowish abstract face i did, think the pencil outline was a one liner Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 random between wage, neber, boxhead, Des, Kasa, Ceba, Sine, tride, >U crew and alot more.. ill do the rest later :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 28, 2010 Share Posted February 28, 2010 nice nice^ esp feeling decys slaps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 Dope ass collection, i should post up my sticker exchange book, i'll get some flicks, so you guys can see some of the stylews you sent me, and i'm sure some of you others would like to see some. I'm likimg my black meska i did for you, that electric yellow forcefield is dopey! although i can see where i tried to get a little too complicated before my time, still not too bad of an effort haha... I can see where I can improve lots, i think we needs to get another exchange going, you've gotten way better ocean. I'll send you guys another batch of collabo stickers too cause those were fun as hell to make. Hey alts and freak, could you guys do the same, I would like to see the stickers i sent you again, or post them up on the hidden tmw page. edit: lol @ my throwy, i kinda gave up on those, I should try some new ones. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 will do it when I get home from work tomorrow, cos I'm going to bed now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 Cool, cool, i'ma go buy some bud soon, then i'll take some flicks of my book. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 Good stuff. I really like that Iron Man Meska. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 yaaa. glad to get the sticker flow back! just what i intended to do! more slaps needed!! did up the OLD ps2 chillin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 theres the rest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 cover 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Big Teetas Posted March 1, 2010 Share Posted March 1, 2010 fatty, just a simple Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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