insane30 Posted April 22, 2005 Share Posted April 22, 2005 wow ur actually not as bad as ive seen lately....my advice is totaly get rid of the wanabe fill and lil desings inside for now, um get cleaner, and work on structure for ur letters, stop arrows, start wit simple ass fuken letters...peace hope that helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beelkaemoney Posted April 22, 2005 Share Posted April 22, 2005 here ill contribute..heres some toyness..BORED @ WORK!!! WHAT THE FUCK!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane30 Posted April 22, 2005 Share Posted April 22, 2005 wow u must make good money...u type on a DELL keyboard,lol....boredum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamBand Posted April 22, 2005 Share Posted April 22, 2005 just started.... comments please.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane30 Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 on the first pic u posted...work on the M, i have trouble wit M's too sumtimes but u gota make it proportional and not all circely Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wink ONE Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 Beelkae...your hand is pretty nice, especially the "N". However, work on that throw (Yeh, I know Philly isn't big on throws). Stop your R from combining with your F, it looks like one big slop. JimBand...your first bit was alright..it's got potential, but that other shit must go. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H of BL Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 ^a shitty flick of a rooftop peice i did a while back^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
donky Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 http://www.domain.com/picture.gifmf1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
segway Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 thanks for any help, i know i was a bit sloppy filling it in Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlistaCompact Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 H of BL, can you get a better pic of the rooftop? donky, the image does not show up. segway, practice practice practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H of BL Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Originally posted by BlistaCompact@Apr 23 2005, 04:46 PM H of BL, can you get a better pic of the rooftop? Quoted post Ill try, that was the best one i have but next time im around there ill bring my cam Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runci Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcstylez149 Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 opinion?!?!? what do i need to work on? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlistaCompact Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 What does it say? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcstylez149 Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 dnye* thats what i write. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlistaCompact Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Yeah man you need help. My first suggestion is that you should practice simple letter sketches a lot more because your's is looking wack. Definatly get rid of that Y connecting to the N and E. My second suggestion is that you and other toys should review the previous 30 or so pages of this thread to see other toy's works, progressions, and the advice given to them, as it is useful. Also, on page 60 (I think) there is a link to the straight letter thread which you should check out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mischief brew Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 im a toy heres a fuck around page simple stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcstylez149 Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 thanks blista imma check it out and some of my shyt sucks really bad not all il show u more later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 EKSO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beelkaemoney Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by Wink ONE@Apr 22 2005, 10:06 PM Beelkae...your hand is pretty nice, especially the "N". However, work on that throw (Yeh, I know Philly isn't big on throws). Stop your R from combining with your F, it looks like one big slop. JimBand...your first bit was alright..it's got potential, but that other shit must go. Quoted post thanks for the hand comment..nah on that throw your right i ran em together cause i wasnt payin attention.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABSTRKT Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by freakeenyc@Apr 10 2005, 02:17 AM is this considered simple? disregard the colors. seriously. Quoted post dont use the tag freak... cause out of miami there is a well know writer... FREEK... and he gets down... hot stuff.. ill look for some of his work and try to post it up today. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ABSTRKT Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by dcstylez149@Apr 24 2005, 07:53 PM opinion?!?!? what do i need to work on? Quoted post simple... step 1... make each letter be its own... step 2... unless you are collor blind... nothing should ever have that bad of a color scheme... ever... not even barf... make the D... a D... make your N... an N.... the Y needs to look like one....etc... good luck in the future.... lay of the colors for a bit... get the letters first... then do simple single to 2 color deals... with matching colors and a nice solid outline.... and go from there on. gl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Leader Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by faze 1@Apr 22 2005, 06:40 AM :yuck: criticize :yuck: :yuck: Quoted post it just looks like a really really shitty niser bite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
menacer.. Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beelkaemoney Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by menacer..@Apr 25 2005, 02:50 PM Quoted post wow :huh2: i dont think i ever seen someone paint in there backyard literally..how often do you buff and repaint that shit?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlistaCompact Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Ekso, you have improved slightly. Your best work out of your most recent post is the 2nd to last one, even though it still needs some work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
menacer.. Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 Originally posted by beelkaemoney@Apr 25 2005, 07:09 PM wow :huh2: i dont think i ever seen someone paint in there backyard literally..how often do you buff and repaint that shit?? Quoted post Well I paint both sides, I paint it prolly 8 times a week or more and I prime it down with brown every two weeks or so. Yeah, I'm in the air force in england so I stay praticed up on base so that when I go to london for trains and shit I can keep it clean,..... stay up free your mind crewski chicago, london, amsterdam....2005 mennosaurus rex Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane30 Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 heres some freek shit from miami...didnt i say before the name was taken..o well w.e hope u get the point and drop the name...just a suggestion, ull prolyl not catch beef but that aint the point...pz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dcstylez149 Posted April 25, 2005 Share Posted April 25, 2005 thanks for the tips jw what yall thought. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 aite since the name FREEK is taken....is it ok if i just change my name to freaky, cuz ppl actually no me by that...or sum variation using those letters cuz im used to writing em? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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