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not really sure what I think of this one, sometimes I like it others not, I tried to recreate the looseness of the Relm battle piece

 

alts, i feel like kind of a douche bag whan i come on here and break a piece

down with some sort of authoritarianism like im fuckin leonard maltin or whatever,

but you seem open to constructive criticism, so ima speak my piece...

 

i think your letters, once i recognize what/where they are, are sick, but there in

lies a key issue with your pieces: at times, the letters themselves lack clear

definition. I love the compostion, the placement/flow of the extensions and

arrows, but i agree with mek, the LTS can be read, but we gotta search for the A.

 

if you would make the outline go a little further in the right places, make it so that

the letter's strokes, not the additions, were the the first thing recognized, it would make

the piece go from good to holy fuckin shit.

 

specifically, on the A i mean the conneciton from the bottom left to the middle bar,

and on the S, the way the tail end meets with the middle. these are things that can

work, but if they loose their definition, the whole letter structure gets lost too.

 

keep up the good work, man.

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