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Originally posted by CasperMigo

I know they suck but tell me why.

 

 

for the most part, its just babble. there is not structure, the dimensions dont match, where they should at least. the lines dont flow at all, its just not something you should be doing right now, SIMPLES is the thing you should be doing, however, the girls are ill as hell

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hah

 

great observation.. i thank you for making that clear for me...i wasnt sure if i was a sarcastic toy or just a toy....check the name of the thread bud..

hah..i know i'm toy but whats some shit ta help me out..not make me self concious and you seem concieted..

peace

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Originally posted by ClueTwo

Wrong Clue, but I had to post this again, for BabyKlue...Just so you know what your up against...

 

http://home.graffiti.net/clue_2/KlueSpanksyourassoner.jpg'>

 

word, good lookin stuff.. im not up against anyone though.. i do this for me, not for you. and amerzero, thanks, preciate the constructive criticism.. just makes me want to draw more.

 

peace

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Originally posted by CasperMigo

http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/86011/0.jpg'> http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/86011/1.jpg'>

Here's another unfinished and an older one

 

 

ok, I am going to be a bitch and tear these apart. i'm sure these get props on here, because most of the people posting here are coming from a graphics backgroung, and are easily mistified with poeple's ability to draw or shade.

 

first, you are shading too much, the lightest parts of the body would benefit from being left unshaded altogether, and the darkest parts should be darked. It's all a bit middle-gound really

 

Second, you are getting all caught up in "I'm drawing a sexy girl" and not paying enough attention to the whole body shape. The hand and arm on the "tattooed" one is completely wrong - crammed in small in order to keep it on the page. It gives a drawing a sense on depth if you allow the body to be "cut off" by the edge of the page - ie, it makes for better composition.

 

The hair on the one grabbing her tits is awful. it derves as much time and effort as here tits do, but you've just scribbled in a bunch on random lines. Her tits look like some melons shes carrying against a flat chest, you went so nuts shading them that they are too spherical, and here cleavage looks like she has been kicked in the sternum. And the ott abs you gave her look like a second boobs is about to sprout beneath the one she is holding.

 

No doubt these were drawn from photo's = cool I do that too. But if you ever want to be able to render the body properly, you will need two things:

Practice with more than airbrushed photos of plastic girls.

AND

Actual life drawing

 

 

If these things aren't for you, satrt looking at doing more stylised, cartoony characters

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't take this personally, I do actually have some experience in this area.....I am trying to help

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Originally posted by ActivRok

this looks like a Gorillaz bite. you know from that one music video/

 

LMAO yeah thats Russel from the Gorillaz and Del did a voice for him in one song, but i never claimed him as my own original character..if dork can use homer simpson, mario, and starkist in his shit and its not a bite, how does drawing a gorillaz character become one? :rolleyes:

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Originally posted by ClueTwo

Well choose another name while you do the "drawing"....

 

http://home.graffiti.net/clue_2:graffiti.net/Kluer.jpg'>

 

word, if i feel like it i might.. but I don't think I will right now..

 

 

http://216.221.143.46/klue2.jpg'>

http://216.221.143.46/klue4.jpg'>

http://216.221.143.46/sketch.jpg'>

 

forgot this one:

http://216.221.143.46/sketch2.jpg'>

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