Politics&Bullshit Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soul_patrol Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 yo any advice on my letter forms cheers i ran out of the room on the x sub (i know theres already a sub i was playing with different letters in my b.book). peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jank Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 insane kiksta u really didnt think that was toy? o well if u like it cool man. ye the last A brings it down. try n keep the letters the same height, like the bottom of the S is way above the bottom of the R. I personally dont like the fat bits comin off the letters, like the top of the S. keep goin tho man... nice RK:) lang nice colours! 1st one: crisp clean nice. goooood. i dont like the bottom of the L that slants upwards, but its real good. i love the second one. if anything the top right of the N is a litlte pointy n rigid, but its real nice man. 3rd one: the A seems too wide for me..not really in keeping wit the rest of the style. that G is crazy man! i dno if i like it but its pretty kl lol... ye im not feelin no 3 quite as much, but still not bad! soulp. i see how u ran out of room for the X, and that mite b y it is too skinny. but keep the letters consistent widths... like i rekon the bottom of the E is a bit fat. also the arrows dont agree wit me, but its sorta got a futuristic look so it. nice1 i quite like the sub. the letters seem a bit seperated from each other, and the B is a diff style to the others as it is fatter. keep it tho man, maybe try some slightly simpler stuff, but stay up. AND IF U WANT FEEDBACK AT LEAST FUKIN COMMENT ON THE PPL ABOVE U!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soul_patrol Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 thx for the advice jank, sorry i didnt comment i wasnt being a fool by not commenting, i had to rush out thats all... yo kicksta im feelin that ting like jank said the a on the end could do with tweaking. sort the fills and colours bruv, but apart from that i think its pretty dope i love that rk 2 letter its got flow man yo lang, you got a pretty nice style going, the 3rd one is pretty sick, that G sets it off bruv, im feeling the top one aswell, im not really feeling your 2 letter though but your coming out with fresh stuff keep it up. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 and he still didnt comment on the others lol!!!! :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 few bits from me try some new tag im thinking of Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imatagstar Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 thanks 4 the advice to times(1) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 second one i used the undersheet for my drawings, let me know what you guys think. Quoted post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 I have some shit on page 138 that needs C&C, i have commented on about 3 people and no one gave me feedback, it would be much appreciated, thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by GrooveChampion@Jan 6 2006, 04:13 PM I have some shit on page 138 that needs C&C, i have commented on about 3 people and no one gave me feedback, it would be much appreciated, thank you Quoted post the only thing i can realy say is, go more simple. i like the ideas, and it seems you put in the right effort, so just master "basic letter structure" and everything should fall into place. sorry i haven't been commenting the last couple of posts, been busy :dunce: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
factotum Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 im looking for some feedback on these simples i've been working on.. lang, i like where you're going with the shades of blue fill, im feeling the flow of those letters the most too. i think the bottom of the g is a little big maybe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theone1 Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 llama1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane_kicksta Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 jank, with some good colours and effects yes i thought that piece may be ok... thanks for ur advice lang i like your colouring but in terms of letter structure the first is a bit too simple for my liking.. i love the 2nd thats dope in all aspects the third in just a bit too wak for me soul patrol try give your letters more of a solid structure.. but i definately like the idea that you got going in terms of style thanks 4 your advice too pecs i liked the throwy you used as un undersheet but the first one just doesnt do it for me, i just dont like the style.. theone i love the first piece.. awesome rendering, for the style its perfect the second one doesnt have anything wrong really either, im just not a fan of the look Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
segway Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 kicksta, try sticking with uniform widths on your letters for a bit longer factorum, dope straights- keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiringone Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 top- canvas, just finished....liked it a lot more when it was just the blue background and letters with a black forcefield, oh well bottom- sketch that i've been too lazy to finish bait---shit is nice and clean, likin the colorin too also likin the stale throwup, not such a big fan of the tilted S on the second one, but that's just opinion alright that's all from me, for now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Insider Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 EKSOxo, your stuff is really good in my opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 DAMN! Theres actualy some good shit in here! specialy stale seems like the only issues in here are letter structure Heres my contribution im addicted to those highlighters right now cant get away from em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 d3fault - i like where your heading with those designs on the inside of the letters and the color combination but try to visually balance your pieces out a bit more. In my opinion, the S doesnt go with the rest of the letters and neither does the E, if that is an E after the K, (or is it an R all together??) i dont know. But yea, practice balance and letter structure a bit more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhoWritesYourRules Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 </br> Ruse </br> </br> Fame </br> </br> ESR (esroe) </br> </br> Kro </br> </br> Kro </br> </br> Kro </br> </br> Ruse </br> </br> Just some different stuff i'm messing with in my b-book, i'm just looking for some feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 that kro needs to get off graffiti creator... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 LETTER STRUCTURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah insom i get what you mean about the s not flowing with the rest, thanks for bringing that to my attention but as far as the e being off i think it fits real nice n snug in there and it says xedis Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DKbmx836 Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 any opinions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 real nice, maybe a darker 3d to make the letters stand out a little more though, i like the light colored i also. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 it says casey jus to let you all know i think this one flows alot better than the previous so thought id post it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DKbmx836 Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 Originally posted by enokeem@Jan 7 2006, 08:32 PM real nice, maybe a darker 3d to make the letters stand out a little more though, i like the light colored i also. Quoted post yea i got a very limited amount of sharpies to work with. i need to jack me some prismas or something. to bad no where around here really sells them, or any good markers for that matter :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Insider Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 Originally posted by d3faultu53r@Jan 7 2006, 08:36 PM it says casey jus to let you all know i think this one flows alot better than the previous so thought id post it Quoted post yeah dude it flows alot better than your other one, i really like the coloring also. nice work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 new blackbook/sihtty pictures Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 yea i got a very limited amount of sharpies to work with. i need to jack me some prismas or something. to bad no where around here really sells them, or any good markers for that matter :( Quoted post haha, ive got the same situation with low amounts of sharpies, really sucks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reape Posted January 8, 2006 Share Posted January 8, 2006 just something small never wanted to git into it so i just did something plain out of boredness..pointers and help will be appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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