enokeem Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 c&c would be greatly appreciated. and that casey looks much better than the first post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 Originally posted by The Insider+Jan 8 2006, 12:15 AM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (The Insider - Jan 8 2006, 12:15 AM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-d3faultu53r@Jan 7 2006, 08:36 PM it says casey jus to let you all know i think this one flows alot better than the previous so thought id post it Quoted post yeah dude it flows alot better than your other one, i really like the coloring also. nice work. Quoted post [/b] yea man, good improvement...i like what you keep doing with the interior of the letters...good stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 Originally posted by DKbmx836@Jan 7 2006, 08:22 PM any opinions? Quoted post thats a good start, youve got the simple lettering down packed - and nice color choices...nothing awkward, i just dont think the extended 3D part before the H should be there... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 melo : i like the dark green one...you're just missing some pink on the M but im sure you noticed that..Not really feeling the characters behind the second one..but youve got good skills/shows potential. pecs: everything looks pretty good...BUT....i wouldve gone without the echoing lines on the block one, and another E (maybe rounder?)would have made the red and white one a bit better...in myyyy opinion. hope this helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 9, 2006 Share Posted January 9, 2006 Melo, cool stuff i like the dark green one as well, the one i also like is the one with the 3 characters, but i really dont think the M flows well at all, it looks quite sickly Pecs your stuff is coming along nice i think it is getting better, i think that if you can get yourself a catchy first letter then your pieces will develop more Also i would like to thank everyone here for saying things like "simpler" i just didnt want to hear it for a while but the other day i was like fuck it so i started doing simples, and let me tell you i think i aready have improved, it is very important to have basic letter structure down, i will post some of these simples later to see if what i think is correct Late Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Here are those simples i was working on, i think the bottom one is much better than the top, but i hate the colors, i was just treying to play with alot of colors at least i know now not to use these combos anyway tell me what you think Oh also any suggestions on the E's?? i really feel like they ruin it all, i kind of hit the wall with them and they kind of feel out of place Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 groove champion i agree with you, the second one is much better, the fill looks nice. i'd work on the v's the could be mistaken for a J or O. and for the E - if you're not happy with it, try a capital E, see where that takes you in this stage of the game, its necessary to experiment to find your own style and what you're comfortable in ps - thanks for the crits guys, greatly appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 yeah i tried to put something on the bottom of the V, i have been struggling with V's simply because there are only so many ways that you can write one, but the more i draw it the more i see diff ways. thanks for the crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 draw or trace a circle first then build the e in the circle ... remember letter structure keeping all the width equal ... this isnt a very good example but im sure you get the idea Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 yeah i did that, what im saying is i had a hard time getting it to flow with the rest of the piece, i didnt want to just make it look like and e, you know? anyway thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Originally posted by GrooveChampion@Jan 9 2006, 10:14 PM yeah i tried to put something on the bottom of the V, i have been struggling with V's simply because there are only so many ways that you can write one, but the more i draw it the more i see diff ways. thanks for the crits Quoted post there are endless possabilities, don't limit yourself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 newest one from me!!! :clown2: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 vare-like others have said keep your 'bars' all the same width, or atleast similar.keep it more simple, i know it sounds lame or whatever but thats what im doing for the most part. its not as easy as you think, and it definetly helps in the long run and now, especialy for letter stucture. keep at it and use advise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 been using bars same width for fucking time ran outta things to do with it except leave it dull plain bars so spiced it a little plus that was a trail run gotta work my A out aabit more then things should look alright! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 o ya, make it cleaner. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 few older ones from me few bars and few mixed style!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 that blue and aqua one looks pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Ok was feeling inspired today, so i did this, i think it is the best ive done yet, still might move some lines around here and there especially on the E, but overall i think it is a pretty solid composition and will probably keep it looking very similar to this I know i need at arrow on the E or something similar to tie it all together, im not quite happy with where it is now and i think it should be facing inward to the left Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 enokeem Posted Today, 04:01 PM that blue and aqua one looks pretty good. yeah i agree i think that is your best one, i would laos suggest certain things like on your E's to me it is not pleasing to look at the middle bar of the E come out past the other two, i think when you write your stuff and the lines are closer together it looks better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickRun Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 aight i'm getting into stickers lately. i have a blackbook that i have been workin in for about a year, just never really go into anything on the streets (prolly been too busy or something). So just tell me what you guys think about this, my character (blanko). You get diss me all you want I just need some honest feeback. Thats all done buy sharpies, but once i find myself some money I'm getitng some decos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 This blanko guy looks like a thing done by alot more famous writer named random (he does teh character "Buff monster" which is what yours resembles) but i do like the simplicity of it, perhaps give him more emotion, i think that something is still missing, to me it feels like it is missing something that will really make it your own Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuickRun Posted January 10, 2006 Share Posted January 10, 2006 Originally posted by GrooveChampion@Jan 10 2006, 07:25 PM This blanko guy looks like a thing done by alot more famous writer named random (he does teh character "Buff monster" which is what yours resembles) but i do like the simplicity of it, perhaps give him more emotion, i think that something is still missing, to me it feels like it is missing something that will really make it your own Quoted post Yeah I was thinking, and I've seen buff monster I do realize does look kinda the same. I do need to add something to it, just don't know yet. suggestions would be awesome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluts_r_us Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 quick run- maybe you could add some cartoony lookin arms that are waving around or doing stuff, with some white gloves or something. just a thought. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ptah_Tutelary Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 those blankos resemble the head of el toros shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 groove champion, i know you think its your best piece yet, but trust me stay a lil more simpler. but its good you're gettin inspired and to post older work for a battle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EKSOxo Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 to all the people whos posting take your time all the work has been looking forced, vare- drop the color for now grab a black bic pen and go to work b. australia work on spacing melo-step back look at it and take off all thos extension slut r us-spacing needs work also Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
conspiringone Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 canvas i'm workin on for someone, not done yet edit: sorry about the size, crappy cell-phone pic and when you resize them they get blurry.... and my friend wanted me to post this for him: it's a canvas he was just workin on, but he has no posting ability Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted January 11, 2006 Share Posted January 11, 2006 GRABED MY BIC AND GOT TO WERK AND THIS IS WHAT BECAME OF IT ! STILL PLENTY TO TRY OUT ON IT SO ILL TRY ANOTHER FOR TMRW Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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