Joker Posted April 29, 2022 Share Posted April 29, 2022 @EGGZ- those Gs are way better. And your letter composition and scale is better as well. Very nice... 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted April 29, 2022 Share Posted April 29, 2022 @lordkisami- forgive my sloppy sketch, but I agree with what others mentioned regarding your R. I've sketched out a quick option for an alternative way to lay down your letters. I think with this style an uppercase E might work better... or it could just be my preference. 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted April 29, 2022 Share Posted April 29, 2022 Thanks joker. Yeah I'm not going to go far from this style of G anymore. Glad I've fixed it. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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LUGR Posted April 29, 2022 Share Posted April 29, 2022 6 hours ago, EGGZ said: This is a nice improvement and definitely the strongest work you have posted. The bottom of you E is sitting a little low and the bottom of your Z a little high. The perspective on your 3D conflicts with the the 3D in the hole of your Z. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted April 30, 2022 Share Posted April 30, 2022 16 hours ago, LUGR said: This is a nice improvement and definitely the strongest work you have posted. The bottom of you E is sitting a little low and the bottom of your Z a little high. The perspective on your 3D conflicts with the the 3D in the hole of your Z. Thanks LUGR for the crit. I see what you saying about the 3D in hole on Z. And the hight of my E. I also think levels of my words aren't exactly how I'd like. Id prefer to arch the bottom to be honest so i want to try that. There's deff room for improvement, but I'm happy with my progress so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted May 2, 2022 Share Posted May 2, 2022 so i took the advice and closed up the R, i also made the E cap..my fill isnt great just trying some new things with markers right now..what do yall think? 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted May 2, 2022 Share Posted May 2, 2022 L deff couldve been bigger.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted May 10, 2022 Share Posted May 10, 2022 On 5/2/2022 at 10:07 AM, lordkisami said: L deff couldve been bigger.. That would be my only real bit of feedback - the vertical bar of your L could be slightly taller. Not too much, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted May 19, 2022 Share Posted May 19, 2022 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted May 29, 2022 Share Posted May 29, 2022 @EGGZits really coming along well man.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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EGGZ Posted May 31, 2022 Share Posted May 31, 2022 On 5/29/2022 at 12:21 PM, lordkisami said: @EGGZits really coming along well man.. Thanks man. I'm slowly getting there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted June 4, 2022 Share Posted June 4, 2022 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LUGR Posted June 4, 2022 Share Posted June 4, 2022 You seem to consistently be doing this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted June 4, 2022 Share Posted June 4, 2022 29 minutes ago, LUGR said: You seem to consistently be doing this. Yeah. Maybe I might measure a few dots to go off from now on haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LUGR Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 3 hours ago, EGGZ said: Yeah. Maybe I might measure a few dots to go off from now on haha Some of it may be the angle of the pic. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 Maybe true. But I have definitely had issues lining it all up previously. I'm happy with this sort of simpler style. Hopefully I continue to improve on it. I can definitely understand now it's all about the flow and letters before the colours and fill. I was going to colour it and I looked at it and said, you know what, I like it plain in white. I have ruined alot of my attempts with over complicated stuff and too much colour or additions.. 2 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LUGR Posted June 5, 2022 Share Posted June 5, 2022 ^That’s some smart stuff you are saying. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted June 13, 2022 Share Posted June 13, 2022 any thoughts before i mess it up with the fill..lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted June 13, 2022 Share Posted June 13, 2022 @lordkisami- my initial reaction is to ease up on the breaks in all your line work. You're not consistent with them (look a the difference between the L and the R) and honestly they don't add any style value to the piece, especially when you use that many. It feels like you're trying to replace a style with the line breaks and that's not a good path to go down. Also, the O looks like you kept it locked up in the basement for months and only fed it leaves and water when compared to the rest of the letters. I'd beef up the weight of the O, too. I did a very quick sketch to show what I mean... 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted June 14, 2022 Share Posted June 14, 2022 i just looked back on alot of things ive done recently and i did notice that my O's come out smaller than the other letters..ima keep those things in mind and work on not over thinking things, cause that honestly a big issue i have rn when im drawing.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted June 14, 2022 Share Posted June 14, 2022 (edited) cause i just started this one before checking back and i did the same fucking thing, lol..i made the o waaay to small.. Edited June 14, 2022 by lordkisami Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordkisami Posted June 14, 2022 Share Posted June 14, 2022 is this better? i did this up really really quick so its not super neat.. @Joker Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted June 15, 2022 Share Posted June 15, 2022 @lordkisami Yes! That is way better. Nice job. Draw that same outline ten times, each time making slight adjustments... slight, like... very slight. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EGGZ Posted July 31, 2022 Share Posted July 31, 2022 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Joker Posted August 17, 2022 Share Posted August 17, 2022 @EGGZ- I was just looking through your sketches again and something that kept hitting me was the idea of using your E to create your Z. It'll help you make your entire piece feel more consistent in the way it looks/feels. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted August 17, 2022 Share Posted August 17, 2022 Even more in line... 4 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nachodik Posted August 18, 2022 Share Posted August 18, 2022 @Joker I know its been a while but i still been drawin, id love a crit on these 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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