freakeenyc Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 word i like that speak..like u said the K and S arent too consistent with the other letters..also id prob make the A lowercase since the p and e seem to be..or rather the E uppercase ..but that would probably take away from the thing u have going with the P and E.and the 3ds off in the S in a part.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speaker2 Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 Yeah ten months along and I still suck at 3d. But actually thanks for suggesting to do that I like the style I got going there. I'll admit it I haven't done too many pieces on walls and they all suck, maybe I should try something this simple on walls before trying other simple styles. and I seriously can't tell if Romero is trolling or not....but most rollers look damn similar soooooo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 give me a dime for every toy that writes "speak"... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 hell yeah, battle. fucked up the 3d shit looks clean mutant. I think the n should be a little curvier to match the e's or come to a thin line to match the v, but that's just a personal preference and it definitely doesn't look bad as is Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supreme79 Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 The "S" doesn't flow with it otherwise not bad... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torch21 Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 a fast one at work Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kasc-One Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 Aha I'll probably suck it up altogether but I could get one in tomorrow probably. Kasc? sounds good love dem letters. nah not kasc, KLINE and @freak i doubt i could rock a perfect one but i think i can do one, i'll try to post one later today Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
romero Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 deos- definitely feelin the fill, but not so much the "crinkle" in your letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigears Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 come on son Not to be THAT guy, but that horrible gary ripped ass microsoft font isn't original either. so... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speaker2 Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 give me a dime for every toy that writes "speak"... Yeah its kind of unoriginal but if any other toys wanna contest it I'll be happy to be bested by one. And there aren't any super well known writers that use it as far as I know so who gives a fuck? and kasc I hope I can get that exchange in today but it'll just be my usual shitty unfilled sketch. One I give a fuck only about lettering right now and two todays hectic and this weekends worse. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 outta room Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KikomanJohnson Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 A couple recent blackbook pieces Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 deos- definitely feelin the fill, but not so much the "crinkle" in your letters any idea on how i should improve my effects? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigears Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 if you're not writing: dondi, cope10, cop, snitch, rat, faggot... then who cares. giraffe: the Q's cool, probably look better as an O tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
romero Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 any idea on how i should improve my effects? Don't worry so much about effects yet, keep it simple. you paint a real mean simple and it's all downhill from there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speaker2 Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 ^Yup though I felt bad and so I google imaged it and all the speak shit is terrible and I'll be burning it by this time next year easy. Then I searched what would be my second choice-Keas and theres good shit. It's funny how what you expect to be original isn't that original...shit I'm not gonna post in here again without linking a flick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 your right bigears. Qs and Os are hard to mold Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 My latest. Gunna scan it, edit opacity, make changes and trace. But thought id post this for some crit. Goin back to an old style i fucked with mixed with some new shapes and letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigears Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 ... Not sayin your Q's bad. It's a decent simple, but you'd see x'd o's but not q's you know? most likely because the Q has a tail on it. Lastly it looks like your letters have all sorts of different styles to them. try to give all something a lot more in common. bars bars bars. My latest. Gunna scan it, edit opacity, make changes and trace. But thought id post this for some crit. Goin back to an old style i fucked with mixed with some new shapes and letters. I'd drop a lot of those extensions. they seem like they're cluttering it up, more than taking up negative space. I like a lot of your painted pieces more than your sketches (dont take that the wrong way though) they're just a lot cleaner. Another thing, your T is sort of lopsiding the whole word. check out your R, drop the leg and you already have a T, flip it and keep the whole thing balanced. when you look at your sketch, make a central line, then picture it as a physical object, if you stood it up on a pin, would it balance or would it tip one way or the other? It's not so much about making both sides symmetrical, it's about weight distribution from the central point. As far as your A and N go for letter structure, I can't make them out at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigears Posted October 13, 2011 Share Posted October 13, 2011 ... A couple recent blackbook pieces First flick, straight up drop the I to K connection. Second, The H to E connection is clever, but it leaves the H looking half finished and naked. Try to steer away from connecting letters to one another. Second and Third, practice your E's. Use bars and bend later when you're comfortable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 No offence taken! I feel ya, the whole right side is like scribbles haha. And thanks, i dont paint as much as id like so i end up going simplier Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 Lastly it looks like your letters have all sorts of different styles to them. try to give all something a lot more in common. bars bars bars. \ yea just fuckin around really. giving different letters characteristics to "describe" them so to speak. it eventually turned into "lets see how many different styles i can do" @spawn RAST? 3ds on point. i would say its structure thats lacking. maybe take a step back, a little more simple. also if your going for symmetry, commit to it. otherwise it just looks.. off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 Yeah i like fucking with different styles. This one is a throw back you could say haha, havent played with it in a minute. And i feel you on the symmetry, its hard to do especially because i dont want to have the same extentions on each side. And no its not rast haha. The n came out stupid because besides the middle bar i modeled it off the a. And thanks about the 3d i shat that out just to fill negative space to make it easier to analyze ya know. Contrast. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 Yeah i like to fuck with different styles. I mean i have a basic main style but i like experimantation. No not rast, the n was just a retard because i modeled it off the a and had troubles. I love symmetry but its hard, really its the extentions and scribbles that throw it imo. And thanks for the 3d i just did that to fill space that wasnt a letter and make it easier to analyze Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 Damn oops.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
im_new_here Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 vassenato. worst straight letter ive ever seen. honestly. mutant rancor. kill yourself. please.. Ahhhh the kid from the Louisville thread? How can you come in here and be negative with a bunch of toys? Doesn't seem right in my book. Quit being harsh, there is a reason this thread is called TOYS POST HERE, because they are trying to develop, idiot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
giraffe pussy Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 this k is killing me. help me out i know the R is too skinny Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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..romero.. Posted October 14, 2011 Share Posted October 14, 2011 The C killed me and both purples look the same :/ Feel like its missing something any crits??? come on son come on son come on son come on son come on son come on son Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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