eski173 Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 it sucks, and there is NO way that is one continuous line. That little peak on the A isn't part of the continuous line... actually the outline is all conected, lmao....... it sucks! great! say what you say it's all good! just curious, what level you on Burns? any pics? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cr3D Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 @Centry that handstyle you're workin with is freshh. New to these forums, heres a few recent flicks of some sketches. My handstyle needs serious work. [/img] 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 good shit cred, centrury! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 cred, decent entrance. advice, take it or leave it, is be mindful of your negative space. try to make that balanced as well. I know the C and D have no mid bars to take up space, but with leans, serifs, and whatever the fuck you want to extend, the space should feel even. maybe get a bigger book. the R and E are suffocating. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cr3D Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 Thanks Eli, i've been trying to keep it simpler for awhile and just now have started adding a few extensions here and there, Thanks for the crits they are always appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cr3D Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 Tried to fix balance out the negative space some, but didn't want to go overboard with extensions yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MN_Nice Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 BLAOW. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..romero.. Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 shit looks whack so whatever. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 dope ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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klobersaurus Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 That cred looks decent, but I think the bottom of that R could flow into the E a little better. But that's just my 2 cents. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 just take it back to the basics, dude. there's no way to salvage this shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 yup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 OH, you mean like this wretch? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARA333 Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 tips? just throwing letters together Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 dont get umad, wretches throws are better than yours eski. u gottaget basic throws down before even attempting 1liners Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 lol, i know im bad but..... damn.... i can't be that bad........ gotta just work at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 OH, you mean like this wretch? but... these aren't bad? and stop trying to fling shit at people whenever they give you advice. just because you might not think they're as good as you, doesn't mean they can't be right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 lol.. it's all good homie........ it is what it is.. imma keep doing my thing and try to step my game up.... you do the same...... no feelings here, just call it how i see it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 ok, fuck the bs.... let's keep this thread moving with pics..... shitty or not, lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cr3D Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Keepin it simple for 4/20 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cr3D Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 Keepin this thread movin Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 exchange for flor... i know its far from great so hit me with the crits... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eski173 Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 Keepin this thread movin looking good cred, you stepping it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geargff Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 ehhh... Crits... and if someone can do a rough outline or something it'd appreciate. Especially throwie KER good, keep it simple, keep practicing, and you'll develop. I'm not too great at all but I feel myself develop since when I started. You probably are, but if you don't use bars to form letters use them. (When I got that tip my letters went from down syndrome imperfections to halfway decent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted April 27, 2012 Share Posted April 27, 2012 something im working on for vims Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ARA333 Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
centrysams Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 lyfe exchange IMG_0242 by centrysams, on Flickr acer xchange IMG_0246 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0247 by centrysams, on Flickr IMG_0249 by centrysams, on Flickr lil toss IMG_0240 by centrysams, on Flickr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted April 28, 2012 Share Posted April 28, 2012 eski if you wanna do one-liners, you gotta go simpler did an example to show you whats good. you want simple readability with a one liner says XMENS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dry Wretch Posted April 29, 2012 Share Posted April 29, 2012 trade good, bad, retarded connections? what? tell me something, dudes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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