Jerms303 Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 thanks yo. ill be posting some sketchs here soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 haha man, you guys are the ones talking stuff, i just post pictures. i would love some instructive critisism but you guys seem to busy putting me down cuz i stick up for my art. im not an internet tough guy like some of you seem to be. again i just want people to see my art. i can care less what you say about it. :confused: :confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerms303 Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 see again.^^^^^^^^^^^ you would rather talk crap then just let it go... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eido Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 yetsio, that is dope apart from the bottom part of the e. Didn't turn out as good as i wanted it too be. 3rd place winner on hecz battle. Bump for no crits Playing about with this style once again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 You've got a lot going on up top and not as much on the bottom. So it doesn't look as strong as it could imo. Try evenly spreading the somplexity of each letter instead of just up top with thise three bars. Also it wouldn't hurt yo add some more and bigger dots in the three d for kicks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 the hecz came out mad dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 Hell yeah. Before I realized it said one on the e I was gunna be like damn you shoulda put more green cuts in the letters, then I was like oh haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EXECUTIVE_FINGERBLAST Posted July 11, 2011 Share Posted July 11, 2011 edit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Stuff i been messing with. All crits welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Maybe extend that bar of the a not connected to the t some. It looks a lot smaller than the other letters. Good shit though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 maybe if i make the connection to the first leg of the A it will balance a little better. I guess the shortest part of the A shouldnt be shorter than the O to be consistent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Rework but now the I feels a little big lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pedophilism Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 I liked your old shit better. Those simples you always posted a while ago. Seems like you've regressed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 disagree. they are still simple, but he is trying to progress, which involves some trial and error. all in all, i think yokai is coming up faster than anyone else here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIZA Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 http://us.mg5.mail.yahoo.com/neo/launch?ncrumb=O1uAg0ABupV&.rand=963916737&nmig=yes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kern Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 CLIPZ crits? just trying out different words to get better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Good start but simplify Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 Simplify and lose the extensions/connections for a while. Also space it out a bit more, let the letters breathe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 12, 2011 Share Posted July 12, 2011 also ty eli, preciate it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kern Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 thanks for the advice duder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIZA Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killamanilla Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 looks alright except for that extension on the left side of the M Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KIZA Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 how do you post pictures on here? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
miahsix Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 how do you post pictures on here? 1. Join an image hosting site such as http://www.photobucket.com 2. Upload your image 3. save it and junk 4. No matter what site you use, you should have several types of "image posting codes" for your photos these days. 5. Select the one that uses the tags. (Those lil' HTML codes inside brackets on each end.) 6. Copy the whole code for said image and paste into the "new reply section" 7. BOOM! Your half-assed Seventh Letter Bite is posted for everyone to see! Credit to MR BOJANGLES for the original post on a different thread, I just found the thread in 30 seconds ;) that credit goes to Google :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Untitled by MR. (Your Name Here), on Flickr advice please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Im feeling your shapes but the linework is sketchy. Also ure E's are quite a bit smaller than ure other letters, would have more impact if the sizes were consistent. PRACTICE PRACTICE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 yeah bro just qwick sketches.. i can make the lines straighter.. thanks yo.. yeah i see those E's now.... always always Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
killamanilla Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted July 13, 2011 Share Posted July 13, 2011 wrong thread niggy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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