redeyedanimal Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 n8, that's an exchange. but i do agree, the letters suck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 can ya be a little more helpful than that? i didn't think it was my best, but this is still my 1st book. i see a lot worse from people writing longer around here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 post up something more simple and i'll crit it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 i've posted a bunch of simps. i was trying out a new font for me, which is a legit typographic style. maybe it's not "graff" enough. i could have spent more time on it to clean it up or whatever, but i think it's just a stylistic preference. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 it's not that, it's just very clear that you don't have much experience drawing/sketching. Post more simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 sez you, homie. :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 ELI: here's yours, sorry i kinda rushed the E and screwed up the D, haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aikr Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virtue Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 I'm feelin' that Phere up there. Nice work, bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viseversa101 Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 phere does so dope shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulOne Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 haven't had a whole lot of time...will put up more when i get done w/ calc2 exam lol and something i did for a friend: and yes, i realize my handstyles are absolute garbage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 Bin away for a while i see a lot of good stuff though nice improvements. havent sketched in a few months :O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 ,,,,, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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ServiceCamp Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 just trying out some block letters, but in my opinion it needzmoararrowz. block letters aren't graffiti enough. POLYP: nice to see you're posting again, i always dig your sketches. i don't have much to crit, besides that i'm not really feeling the handstyle. oh and SOUL: i actually think your handstyle is better than the pieces, you have to do simples. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 that shit is textbook rocking a simple, most dudes naturaly wanna fill the thing up with arrows and shit but keep rocking simples like that adding in shit slowly but surely and youll end up with a sick style man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 yo service thats rap letters enuff...the only thing i gotta say abt it is.. The discontinued U looks weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 SKUMBUM: thanks man, glad you like it. FREAK: ya dawg, but every1 knows u need arrowz. but really.... the broken off piece of the U was kinda supposed to be a piece of the F. i think going even simpler would have worked better. with out all the bits chopped off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulOne Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 service - like it but the letter widths are off in a few areas i think not to be that guy, but could i get a few crits on my post on this page? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 haven't sketched in forever..... i always liked your throws SBE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Polyp Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 first attempt at these hands, big improvements inc haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 service - like it but the letter widths are off in a few areas i think not to be that guy, but could i get a few crits on my post on this page? :confused: :confused: :confused: basically none of your letters have any sort of structure at all, they're just sort of half piece/half throw up which isnt really working at all in your case, as is said every day on this thread,,, SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES! you cannot begin to stylise letters with all the kicks and shit, without first understanding the letters themselves and what characteristics they should/shouldnt have. last time im gonna say this so somebody just quote this anytime it needs to be said it will save a lot of time... open Microsoft word, type in your name, find some fonts you like, keep sketching those font letters until you know them inside out, ONLY THEN should you start trying to add your own style, 3d, arrows, kicks, extentions etc. you have to learn to walk before you run. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the lone bomber Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SoulOne Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 haha will do skumbum. i'll try and do some simples tonight. where do you write man? there's a semi famous grasp out there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted April 27, 2010 Share Posted April 27, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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