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I actually like that, the extensions are flowing a little, could use a little rewqorking round the bottom right? for more balance on the bottom piece, hands aren't that bad either, could use a little refining, but mind do too so hey. I also reckon, maybe make the R's bottom right bar a bit more funky to match the A and add more flow.

 

something like that

 

 

edit, oh and your J could be mistaken for a lowercase d.

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I actually like that, the extensions are flowing a little, could use a little rewqorking round the bottom right? for more balance on the bottom piece, hands aren't that bad either, could use a little refining, but mind do too so hey. I also reckon, maybe make the R's bottom right bar a bit more funky to match the A and add more flow.

 

something like that

 

 

edit, oh and your J could be mistaken for a lowercase d.

 

 

that is a lowercase d, i dont like the upper sketch at all, but i didnt have time and will to cut out just the dare sketch:D

and those hands, thats how i usually write, those arent tags ;)

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help and crit please

 

 

we need a pic we can clearly see your letters with before we can accurately critique it. HOWEVER, first things first: master simples! copy a lovely looking font onto a page in your black book. make it looks sexy. make all your 3d's the same angle and length, for starters. also, don't forget the etceteras, and whatnots.

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