pimps up hos down Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 the a and the e dont look good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grasptheknown Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 i feel the same way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimps up hos down Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 just make them straight like the f k r Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ambitous Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 not toy man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimps up hos down Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 im likin that shit. the arrows played out and shit but everyone uses arrows. i wunna see some colored shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FourEyeGN Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 yeah, um, ive been using that style before i knew of 12oz's existance. Don't flatter yourself, a lot of people use that style. Didn't mean to imply bite, but that's the truth. heres one i used in a battle in December. natural progression lead to my throw. I didn't bite, and that's that. feeling this & the Tomes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 What's that upside-down cross all about? Are you an anti Christ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.jive Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.jive Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 looks like a cool N. i really like it. if you change names, can i have the old one? :P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 ^what do write now? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Sec Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 the width of the bars needs to be straightened up. straight, parallel lines make nice bars. Try keeping the size of the letters more consistent maybe sketch out something like this ( ) [] ( ) , and fill the bubbles with letters or, with lower case, you could just do three circles ( )( )( ) s e c this is for straight lettters; forget doing bubble letters Yeah the first pic is just something I was messing with. My regular bubble letters aren't like that. The only thing I got from this was keep the letters more consistent....understood...thanks. I'm not really sure what you're talking about with the ( ) and [ ] It's whatev...thanks for the crit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfraRed Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Draw out a dang circle and put another circle in the middle of it, then do some erasing and you have a C that's what I'm saying Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Sec Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 I know this is an old post but DAMN i'm diggin that pink one. The highlight inside the pink is fresh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanut_butter_and Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 you mean the low light inside the pink is fresh...... the letter structure is all over the place on that one, the pink masks it, the more I look the more I see fault 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Thanks, Sec! Fuck off, Ricky. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
front line Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 what kind of markers are you useing criminl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 THIS is whats up! props. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Sec Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 When I look at graff I don't pick it apart and analyze the structure of every single bar and extension. However in this case.... yes you are right...the low-light is what I meant. I gives it an embossed effect that pops off the page. If you really want to get technical we can mention that the low light was mis-used in relation to the 3-d. But I'm still feelin the flik....nice use of colors. Fuck the haters. No one is perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 crim thats dopeee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 outline just lookin for input Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanut_butter_and Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 When I look at graff I don't pick it apart and analyze the structure of every single bar and extension. I only analyze the shitty bars and extensions and structure But I'm still feelin the flik....nice use of colors. Fuck the haters. No one is perfect. Haters? if I were a hater I wouldn't be in this pitiful toy thread here giving my opinion. What are you, 12? Instead of trying to sound like a big man, you should focus on your own work and fuck off very much thanks. @silo: forget about arrows and extensions for now. They might be fun and all to throw in, but at the state you're at you really should focus on banging out nice solid simple letters. They're the foundation. Can't stress that enough Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 another outline need feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
peanut_butter_and Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 silo check out what criminl has been up to with their letters, you're jumping in too fast also, on a second note: When I look at graff I don't pick it apart and analyze the structure of every single bar and extension. you should start. thats how you learn to develop. I look at every single thing I see around me and ask myself "How can this be improved" if you can look at a piece and there is not something that you can't see any room for improvement on, then either you're ignorant or its a decent piece. No one's perfect, at least you're right about that. But that opens the door for your own development if you can see those faults Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 simples what do you mean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 silo check out what criminl has been up to with their letters, you're jumping in too fast also, on a second note: you should start. thats how you learn to develop. I look at every single thing I see around me and ask myself "How can this be improved" if you can look at a piece and there is not something that you can't see any room for improvement on, then either you're ignorant or its a decent piece. No one's perfect, at least you're right about that. But that opens the door for your own development if you can see those faults ya i feel ya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo123 Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 I only analyze the shitty bars and extensions and structure Haters? if I were a hater I wouldn't be in this pitiful toy thread here giving my opinion. What are you, 12? Instead of trying to sound like a big man, you should focus on your own work and fuck off very much thanks. @silo: forget about arrows and extensions for now. They might be fun and all to throw in, but at the state you're at you really should focus on banging out nice solid simple letters. They're the foundation. Can't stress that enough alright thanks. what about the oris outline Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 what do you mean. God damn it, wheres that simple image that used to always get posted when you need it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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