SCOER Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 tryed to get spacing a little better but proportions arent good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'eat' paint Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 "lefty" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 i hate my C and E... likin everything but the AN 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ServiceCamp Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 tryed to get spacing a little better but proportions arent good. if theres something that gets me from your sketch is how squiggly your O is. i always choose to make them as round as i can, buts that just my choice. i like how its going though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 .thanks^yeah surpisingly O is the letter i always have trouble with Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 I Changed the O in my name to an E cuz i get stuck on O's. Can't do anything with them... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 lol yea freak. im a "lefty". funny thing is, i dont even remember sayin that last night. late night blazin gets ya. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSeM Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 the m is bigger than the rest thats something i need to work on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WaddaWadda Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 and the rest of those letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSeM Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 i know that it was my first sketch with that style i also need to work on shadows Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted January 17, 2010 Share Posted January 17, 2010 like the C and E shaken few hands, first attempt new steez , comment plx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 ^^^reminds me of Rown. righty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotle Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 trying something new. a little out of my comfort zone to say the least haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 it looks ok, has a bit of an LA flare haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 scoe,my advice to you is to stop the coloring. its cool to do it every once in awhile, yeah, you got these nice markers laying around, fun to use, etc etc. but really, if you're just laying down the framework on it, (so to speak) there is no need to waste the markers on it. sketch some shit out a few hundred times, and when you get to the final, and you really like it, sure, burn some colors on it. but yeah, just hold off on the colors, i mean, it looks like you inda know what yo're doing, but its not neccessary at this early point. if i still had all the markers from back in the day that i wasted on sketchs, i wouldnt have to buy/steal any on a reg basis. keep up the good work though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Where my brothers at? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Freak? Alts? I've been too busy rapping now that i have had some spare time off from schooling . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Those criminls are dope That piece is doo doo brown, and not that i know much about throws, but i like 'em, they are okay, but nothing special, work on your L the most. oh and the hands are ugly. oh and work on straight letter simples, bro. For your piecing, i could critique that, but it's dookie, CRIMINAL.. <-- do it like that but with a drop down 3d n shiznit. Keep all your bars as a consistent width and height, for the individual bars and the whole letter overall. har har har, it feels like old times saying straight letter simples every time i come to this site. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 YO RUKCUS!..wats good dude..get back on the graff game! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 I sended you a private message doggy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 dope as fuck but i cant bbegin to read it.. did this yesterday...dont like the letter structure 2 much..and didnt know wat to do with it in terms of fills Space your letters out more doggy, but I like it. the Letters just look a little squished. and that fill is mad hot, just hard to read, but i know your name so i can read it. Lol fuck, the pic didn't copy over from the boston thread... but it was that blue n white one if you remember. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 For my peoples. Lol, i'll re do them later after i have a meal, my hands are mad unsteady. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 likin that alts one on the left Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 nice hands. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AORAone Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 PKMN CREW? Pokemon? please tell me thats not pokemon crew... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 That piece is doo doo brown, and not that i know much about throws, but i like 'em, they are okay, but nothing special, work on your L the most. oh and the hands are ugly. oh and work on straight letter simples, bro. For your piecing, i could critique that, but it's dookie, CRIMINAL.. <-- do it like that but with a drop down 3d n shiznit. Keep all your bars as a consistent width and height, for the individual bars and the whole letter overall. har har har, it feels like old times saying straight letter simples every time i come to this site Thanks for the tips, but I almost sense a bit of hate in your writing. The fact that you said you don't know much about throws proves a point that maybe you shouldn't even be giving advise. I'll take criticism from heads that know what they're talking about, thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 lovin' this! i feel like the R is missing something or is barely off somehow, maybe try NOT connecting the C to the R and keep the R to the I connection, but change it up in one way or another. Or not. but other than that, your structure is really good, shits evenly spaced, clean as fuck, and its all way better than i could ever do, so... KEEP IT UP!! PS. wut do you use for your initial outline, pencil? Yeah, I hear ya. I felt like there was something wrong with the "R". I just finished a new one and fixed the "R" I think. I kept the same letter structure, though. And yes, I have been using pencil for my initial outline, but I erase it all before I go over it with paint pens. Thanks for the critique and and props, much respect! -Criminl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 CRIMNL: that's my favourite sketch of yours, colors are dope, keep that shit up. one more, simple, bored out of mi mind: Thanks, man! Big ups! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted January 18, 2010 Share Posted January 18, 2010 Ruck knows what he's talkin about, and i doubt he meant to be a dick. What up ruck, long time no see... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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