DKbmx836 Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 imatagstar - first things first. RESIZE YOUR IMAGES! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..::RD::.. Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 any feedback would be appreciated, it says MESH Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 This shit right above me is tight, i like the colro scheme and all, how did you work on your letter forms? that seems to be what i am having the most trouble with, anyway here are my latest Also Just for fun here is the X-mas card i made for last year I have been trying to work on letter form hopefully it has improved somewhat from my last posts and these are more cohesive compositions anywa cant wait for the crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oKeenero Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 my first ever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
oKeenero Posted January 5, 2006 Share Posted January 5, 2006 my very first Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RINO Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d48/zzzdeoszzz/deos13.jpg http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d48/zzzd...opyofdeos11.jpg http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d48/zzzdeoszzz/deos2.jpg http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d48/zzzdeoszzz/deos10.jpg can i get some advise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RINO Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 can i get some advise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RINO Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 advise plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Yo Deos, i havent been writing very long as you can tell since im posting here, so you might want to take what im saying light heatedly, i think your shit is missing a personal touch, like it looks to technical and their isnt enough inspiration in it, its too straight forward, i really, really dig your stickers though, i think they have good composition Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by RINO@Jan 5 2006, 07:15 PM deos dude..i like this one a lot....just dont like the fill Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by <KALOMAN>@Jan 5 2006, 01:32 PM people from my hometown dont want to give me no constructive crit so Im hopin someone here can this was for the battle thread also I need a name it gotta have a R E and S and no longer than 5 letter thanks for the help Quoted post resist rest rems rames refs serf sert serk sire sore score store sores idk just a couple off the top of my head. dont know if their takin by anyone big i dont know about so dont mention it if it is. cuz i dont realy care. your welcome if it helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by ..::RD::..@Jan 5 2006, 05:54 PM any feedback would be appreciated, it says MESH Quoted post just my opinion but i think u belong in the new sketch thread. real nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 yo KALOMAN y dont u just write risen. looks pretty ill to me. plus it meets all ya standards Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..::RD::.. Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 yeah, i put it in there originally but i just wanted some feedback on it and this thread seemed appropriate. thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<KALOMAN> Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by faze 1@Jan 5 2006, 08:35 PM yo KALOMAN y dont u just write risen. looks pretty ill to me. plus it meets all ya standards Quoted post thanks for the help man, I cant write risen though cuz theirs already someone from my home town who writes rise, anywho thanks for the help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 more old shit it's not all mine, so i hope heads don't mind Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enokeem Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 second one i used the undersheet for my drawings, let me know what you guys think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by vare_one@Jan 5 2006, 05:31 PM nice letters and cool cvharacters i like it Quoted post Who are you talking about? (just curious) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edogg Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by sins+Dec 31 2005, 01:01 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (sins - Dec 31 2005, 01:01 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'> Originally posted by edogg@Dec 24 2005, 08:02 PM <!--QuoteBegin-sins@Dec 23 2005, 07:26 PM could u give me some sead back on the lst 4 posts thankx sins Quoted post im just sayin.. Quoted post yer its copyed but still i have to lern some how ............. what would u sagest Quoted post [/b] uh oh i dunno... dont take credit for it maybe? if youre gonna take that big a bite and still feel the need to post it, make sure you cite who actually did it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by Politics&Bullshit@Jan 5 2006, 09:28 PM more old shit it's not all mine, so i hope heads don't mind Quoted post not that it might matter too much, cuz its probably not even your work, but drone is taken by someone i know.....and hes a bit better at the name...just food for thought... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
basekone Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 yea, and my friend writes BEN and is a lot better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by Colonel Sanders@Jan 4 2006, 10:57 PM yo this is my boy....give feedback..thanks 1 Quoted post hey, i dunno if its been said already (sorry if im repeating) but id recommend for your friend to practice color combinations...cuz i mean its coming out pretty good for a beginner or w/e you wanna call it...dont wanna say toy....but yea...colors need to be changed, not feelin em'. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by faze 1+Jan 5 2006, 08:29 PM--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (faze 1 - Jan 5 2006, 08:29 PM)</div><div class='quotemain'><!--QuoteBegin-..::RD::..@Jan 5 2006, 05:54 PM any feedback would be appreciated, it says MESH Quoted post just my opinion but i think u belong in the new sketch thread. real nice. Quoted post [/b] yea i think thats too good for this thread also...if I had ANYTHING i had to say about it...and i really didnt want to but w/e...umm maybe practice balance a lil more?? i dunno...a bit more letter weight on the right of that piece???? no biggy just my 2 cents Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
..::RD::.. Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 yeah, i agree. i got kinda lazy after the M but now i wish the M matched the rest of the letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 awesome ---> :eye to eye: dont want anything taken the wrong way... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Think I should color it??, i think it could turn out to be pretty neat, tell me what you guys think, also i just wanted to share it as well, get some crits and such, its prettty rough sketch but whatever Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane_kicksta Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 i been graffing seriously for about a year now.. i dont think this is toy, whipped it up in 5 for my sis, its her name ursula.. i would just like some feedback, tips Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INSOM Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 im not really likin the lower case A at the end....but hey for 5 mins i think its pretty dope...you should show us the finished product soon..and maybe some sketches youve done for yourself... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I.C.Shadow Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by oKeenero@Jan 5 2006, 11:49 PM my very first Quoted post Omg is that ilf? Sick dood sick. King in no time. :king: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
insane_kicksta Posted January 6, 2006 Share Posted January 6, 2006 Originally posted by INSOM@Jan 6 2006, 06:47 PM im not really likin the lower case A at the end....but hey for 5 mins i think its pretty dope...you should show us the finished product soon..and maybe some sketches youve done for yourself... Quoted post fuck, well at least this is where it belongs now... i had these colours plus one green to work with as you can see didn't make much of an effort so ginore the shitty pencil coloring and gimme some feedback on the rest also im at my dads so ive got nothing to post except for what i draw up here, be back home tomorrow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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