RELAPSER Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 sizzler, theres no clear structure, composition, or thought in yer canvas. take it back to the drawing board... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Of Hell Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 sizzler, theres no clear structure, composition, or thought in yer canvas. take it back to the drawing board... Precisely. And I'll say it again, if you're going to do letters, make sure they are good letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
letterfiend Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 I just finished this the other day. 4'x2.5'. Mixed media on plywood. Please criticize. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
letterfiend Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 fuck, I cant get get the pic right side up right now Ill try to fix it later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlito Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 ........ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlito Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 .......... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JUSTONE Posted June 25, 2007 Share Posted June 25, 2007 HOPE i DID THE PIC THING RIGHT.. The letters are horrible but you are definately on to something interesting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaCypha Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FLICKPOSTIN Posted June 28, 2007 Share Posted June 28, 2007 ................ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boinjamin Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 just not feelin that dragon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaCypha Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 you dont need to feel it.. I sold it already.. plus.. I have yet to see you post any type of work...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatguyVE Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 you've posted that shit like 3 times.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reviser Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 http://www.revisecmw.com Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaCypha Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 you've posted that shit like 3 times.... really,, thanks for keeping count.. sue me.. I smoke herbs and forget shit... lmao.... all you critiques.. let me see flix... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DaCypha Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 revise, i like your site good shyt.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Of Hell Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 How about I critique it? I have plenty of shit in here to look at. That looks like a bad copy of an old ass Ed Hardy dragon. The scales are terrible, and absolutely wrong. They do not follow the dragon body at all, and the legs/claws are terrible with no real formula to any of this. Try studying real old traditional asian dragon paintings to see what I mean. there's more to this than just sticking it on a canvass and trying to make a buck. Try using something other than a paint marker. I don't have any idea what that fleshy eyeballs with a goatee thing is, but it completely detracts from the painting. Oh, and I couldn't care less that you sold it. That doesn't make it good. Britney Spears sells lots of records. It doesn't mean she makes good music, it means there's alot of douchebags out there with no taste and some cash. Same here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 damn. you smashed the hell out of that one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ERIZENO Posted June 29, 2007 Share Posted June 29, 2007 Ah yes ..... the truth can hurt, but the way I see it you can either run from it or learn from it. See ... Now what are you going to do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boinjamin Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 hhahaha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SADDAM HUSSEIN Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 i havent painted a canvas in a while... but it doesnt mean i dont have blank canvases Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spadeo Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 balloon animals for a friend. ww2 canvas sketch with a nurse. more on blog. hoping for a bit more then hyped flash art... http://chrisspade.blogspot.com/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poesia [ ] T Posted June 30, 2007 Share Posted June 30, 2007 Havnt painted in 3 years here is the first canvas im working on. This is a work in progress almost done or maybe its done never can tell...... Send the Feedback i can take the criticism as i deserve it for taking such a long break. Triptych Details Individual Pieces Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Of Hell Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 Poesia!!!!!!! WORD. How have you been man? Those look nice. Looks like an extension of what you were working on years ago. I kind of wish the white boxes wre super clean simple white boxes with no drips..possibly very little overspray of white to soften one of the edges.... I think it might help emphasise the abstraction and looseness of the letters. Im a big fan of contrast even in concept. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Of Hell Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 balloon animals for a friend. ww2 canvas sketch with a nurse. more on blog. hoping for a bit more then hyped flash art... http://chrisspade.blogspot.com/ I think you should give her a shirt. Vintage pin ups were hotter because they were such a tease and if you're going for a period feel you should definitely make her more of a tease than a dirt whore. Also, I know it's a sketch, but the fingers on the hand on the ground look like sausages, and the foot looks akward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poesia [ ] T Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 Thanks, after looking at it again i do want to clean up alot of that side of the canvas, its hard to create abstraction sometimes with order. I tried to balance it the white squares, they were actualy rags i esd using i put on there with white paint to make them stick. Thanks for the feedback, this was just a reaction kind of a familiarity because of the long break in painting. I already have more ideas. Im trying to progress things a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwarrior Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Of Hell Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 2nd grade graffiti canvasses. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silentwarrior Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 appreciate, dont hate mofo... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spadeo Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 I think you should give her a shirt. Vintage pin ups were hotter because they were such a tease and if you're going for a period feel you should definitely make her more of a tease than a dirt whore. I did plenty of research. Perhaps you should look at more nose art. I was looking at original pieces and found many to be nude. Not just a few. The guys usually liked their girls to be showing there titties before they flew to their death. Just because they are nude does not make them dirt whores. Also, I know it's a sketch, but the fingers on the hand on the ground look like sausages, and the foot looks akward. Sausages?. They are sketches. The foot will not change much. please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunt double Posted July 1, 2007 Share Posted July 1, 2007 appreciate, dont hate mofo... there isn't much to appreciate. that shit looks really fucking amateur... if you dont want to accept that then dont bother posting. you are gonna get critiqued no matter what. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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