Spin-Rizk-Nero Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 sum shit ive done. last 1s are stickers Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H!GH Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 Pluto - What can I say... Out Of this world??? jk. Keep it up. Spin - Bump man, i'm feelin ur style. WU-TANG!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 i dont think plutos toy his shits awesome high -- looking good but my guess is ur yellow outline is too thick Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First of Faze Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 word up plutos style looks great painted...ive seen the smae type done many times before htough...yet it never gets old... high im diggin the cream..reminds me of the album with the bubbles cant remember the name and spin...1st and third look hott...real old school early 90's-esque Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrEM1 Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 whoa the pluto's up there look pretty mean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 dude pluto i dont think u belong here cuz...ur definately not a toy so,...ur advice wud be kindly appreciated :p ... i dunno...this is the decentest attempt at wildstyle...i no the connections and flow sucks..any advice on it...other than that it comes naturallly Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soul_patrol Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 yo freak, im feeling it maybe you shold keep workin on simples for a while, i like your style tho keep on it, peace spin i like the 4th piece keep workin at it until you got it down bruv, im feelin that "cream" ting, looks dope pluto you got mad style krem1 your too good :( peace heres a lil sketch advice welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vacuum cleaner Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 I'm diggin' pluto... get outta 'ere, your ish is not toy. And freak, The FRE are nice... I wouldn't have done the extension with the E for the time being, because the extension came out skinny. The A doesn't fit too well, and the K is a little like an H, but you're coming along with some nice stuff. Keep it up (: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echo-location Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 COATL Yeah, I know I forgot a bit of 3D on the L, but taking out/putting away the camera takes too long. The 3D ended up emphasizing how the letters were a little unbalanced, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 the shit above me is dope, I just can't read it. * guess it's not above me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Echo-location Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 COTL (COATL) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 Originally posted by Echo-location@Jan 23 2006, 02:52 PM COTL (COATL) Quoted post nah, homey. I "know" what it says, I just cant read it. (don't get me wrong, shits hot) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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H!GH Posted January 23, 2006 Share Posted January 23, 2006 Turn it down a notch echo, not sayin its bad but.... "Stay Simple, Stay Clean, Stay Up" ....you know how it goes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
faze 1 Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 ^^^yup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melo -btk Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 which one is better? lemme rephrase, which has more potential cuz i did both really quick.. and im tired of this throwie (so hence the change): or should i just stay with the old one ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Quick drop... will comment on others when I get some time... Shit I did on the train coming from work. Blah! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Melo, i think that you should use that purple M in stead of the Green M on the bottom one, i think that might look really cool Flux, cool shit, how do you learn to do that? just practice i guess right? i love your sketches, some very interesting shapes in there that i think you should incorporate more into your drawings Anyway i have a new piece as well, please let me know what you all think i have been working hard on letter structure hopefully this shows improvement Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 @Groove, thanks for the comments homie... What does it say, Nile? I can't really find anything wrong with your piece except its kind hard to make out what it says. Other than that everything else is on point, colors, extension, fill and force field. I even like the chain and eyeball. Just work on your letter structure. Especially the N if that’s what it is. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Politics&Bullshit Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 yo, vile that handstyle needs to go. letter structure is descent (it is a V, right?) the chain is dope, but i'm not feeling the eyeball. flux- that 3d shit you do is tight, i like the shading alot. your coloring is simple, try experimenting, go wild. melo- not realy feelin' those stickers, but the throwie on the wall has more potential, in my opinion. -POLITICS Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 yeah the eyeball didnt flow right, it is not nearly as organic as it was in the sketch, it lost something with the outline, also its not an N its a V, can you point out why it was confusing to you? or is it a good thing? Yeah i know the handstyle BLOWS hard, i dont know how to do one though, like how do i even learn? to me it looks like people just write as sloppy as possible, any suggestions?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheArchitect Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Not to be a jerk Vile but that piece has very little structure. I see the term letter structure thrown around so much these days on these boards but still hardly anyone truly understands what it is. For starters, imaging you are building your letters with boards of wood. The boards are all the same size but you can cut them to make them shorter if needed. The boards can be bended to create curves but they do not get wider or skinnier; they stay the same width in all areas. I know that's not the greatest explanation but it's easier to show with images than with words and I don't have time to post anything up right now. Maybe if I get some time later I'll post something so you can get a better understanding of what I mean. But start with that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackFlux Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 @Politics&Bullshit, yeah I really need to work on my coloring (Markers). That's why a lot shit I post is digital. lol @Groove, oh it says vile... I think you need to work on the lower half of that V because it could be a U and or a J. Like I said, other than that it's on point. I wish I could freak markers like that. What type of markers are you using? I have some prima but they’re only primary and secondary colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Not to be a jerk Vile but that piece has very little structure. I see the term letter structure thrown around so much these days on these boards but still hardly anyone truly understands what it is. For starters, imaging you are building your letters with boards of wood. The boards are all the same size but you can cut them to make them shorter if needed. The boards can be bended to create curves but they do not get wider or skinnier; they stay the same width in all areas. I know that's not the greatest explanation but it's easier to show with images than with words and I don't have time to post anything up right now. Maybe if I get some time later I'll post something so you can get a better understanding of what I mean. But start with that. Please do post some pics because i really really dont get it, i was pretty sure it just meant work on how i form my letters i have not idea what you mean with boards, should i layer them? please post pics i think your explanation would be alot more helpful and clearer if it had pics to go with it Also I have only been writing for 3 months, i dont understand more complicated structures yet Thanks Flux, I have a set of Prismas, i use them for other things besides graff and i have been using them since i have been a kid for the most part (my dad used them_ anyway thats what i use, i love them and i love how they color, but i used to use prisma colored pencils which are also the shit when u press hard enough you get a real good texture Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First of Faze Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 groove, basically what hes saying abotu letter structure is make it all the same width and thickness throughout the letter...i dont really understand why people want this so much because besides the old shcool most newer shit does not stay the smae width it stays in relativity and peopel understand how to make it look but when you go to a right angle from one peice alot of times the horizontal bars will be thinner... or vice versa...but when your beginning and dont do extensions or anyhtign liek that and workign on simples you hsoudl work on your structure in a way to keep the entire peice in one thickness...if you cant understand that i cant explain any better... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First of Faze Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 actyaulyl groove, your peice does have rather good structure it just needs to keep the smooth lines no little indents and outdents liek rinkles on the edge...just stay clam and smooth whiel drawing and dont shake or jerk/twitch your hand whiel drawing...so if you keep the lines clean and smooth your peice would look pritty good but id recommend witching it so the left side of the "v" is the higher not the irght so it wont be confused with a "j" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The First of Faze Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 you forgot 3d on the top of the c too...nto trygin to be an ass just tellign you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrooveChampion Posted January 24, 2006 Share Posted January 24, 2006 Faze first of all, THANK YOU, it was very helpful it was probably the most helpful explanation i have ever gotten. I iddI didnt understand what the big deal about width and shit is though because you are right most of the new shit doesnt look that way, and if it looks good why mess with it, alsoits not an ass comment to tell me something i forgot thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-KARMA- Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 can't find a d i like, it says cord. Feedback... (there are 3 different ds in the top 3 sketches and one on the bottom left, which looks best or what should i do to make the d look better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d3faultu53r Posted January 25, 2006 Share Posted January 25, 2006 karma try adding more rythm i can see two more extensios coming from the top of the d and o heading towards the border of the page or hell make it go at the top again i like it the way it is though .. good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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