sech Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 s Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 word. the next new sketch i post will be a different style. This is about 6 months old, i like it except for the Es overlaps. Y'all think it's worth revisiting? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 def dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 yer pieces look better if you do 32 of the same Es Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 imo..i think keles been finetuning more so then regurgitating...i can definately see subtle improvements and changes..also i think ur E needa be worked on.. Sech..feeln the S destilllery..i like it but cant really read it...i feel like tahts cuz of some unnecessary extensions...does it say seint/? reson..much better en before....i feel like uve gotta really master teh swirly extensions..cus they arent working with it right now.. ruckus..solid simp as always...are u gonna add more details to the snake? cruiser..i feel like ur I is ur weakest letter. sodom..feelin the sech dude! and teh pink filled sodem..keep it up homie! ghost..other than the shit u might get for ur name...(i personally dont care unless ur writing like dondi or some shit..but people do..something to think about also u just started the game so its easier to get disattached to a name) work on simples...keep practicing font style letters till they look exactly em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 i see what you bean by whole i raised the bars on the E and the R tried two diff Ns and shadings too just rough sketches for ideas but i like em, ill clean it up and keep goin till it all clicks anymore crits welcomed! :lol: and i know the last N is wayyyyy to big this is better but i think you should raise tha bend on tha e and on tha r and n. maybe the bends on those two can be done away with completely. try it out. and tha bend on tha outside of tha n doesen't look good. but for tha most part you know what your doin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colorkiller Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 feelin that throwie..... ill shit dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HtotheK Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 imo..i think keles been finetuning more so then regurgitating...i can definately see subtle improvements and changes..also i think ur E needa be worked on.. Sech..feeln the S destilllery..i like it but cant really read it...i feel like tahts cuz of some unnecessary extensions...does it say seint/? reson..much better en before....i feel like uve gotta really master teh swirly extensions..cus they arent working with it right now.. ruckus..solid simp as always...are u gonna add more details to the snake? cruiser..i feel like ur I is ur weakest letter. sodom..feelin the sech dude! and teh pink filled sodem..keep it up homie! ghost..other than the shit u might get for ur name...(i personally dont care unless ur writing like dondi or some shit..but people do..something to think about also u just started the game so its easier to get disattached to a name) work on simples...keep practicing font style letters till they look exactly em. Looks more like a "Saint" to me. but he second letter was a bit hard to see. :scrambled: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 damn cruiser you sure your a toy? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juca Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 word. the next new sketch i post will be a different style. This is about 6 months old, i like it except for the Es overlaps. Y'all think it's worth revisiting? i like that one,seems like you will be done with this "toy" thread soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DakuOne Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 i've been writing for about 2 weeks:o tell me what you think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 daku thats good for 2 weeks dude..keep practicing simples..and generally look at the advice people recieve in the previous posts...as u can learn from em Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DakuOne Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 thnx bro, 2 weeks and i already have beef... im just tryin to get up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
injenear Posted September 30, 2010 Share Posted September 30, 2010 thnx bro, 2 weeks and i already have beef... im just tryin to get up Keep to the books. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 good start but yea man you should hit tha book more than anything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DakuOne Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 are these better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 it's only been two weeks that's how most people start out. keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sharpies Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 this is better but i think you should raise tha bend on tha e and on tha r and n. maybe the bends on those two can be done away with completely. try it out. and tha bend on tha outside of tha n doesen't look good. but for tha most part you know what your doin. thankss yeah keepin at it learning something new everytime haha but all work those out and give it a try and we'll see how it goesss Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 bored at work a while ago... the d seems mad out of place... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 idk crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 damn yo you don't even need tha toy thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 Sodem, I would like to see you stretch those letters out. They always seem so compressed to me. Keep the thin bars the same shape/size, and the fat bars the same. But elongate a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 Bump. also Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destillery Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 Looks more like a "Saint" to me. but he second letter was a bit hard to see. :scrambled: Yeah it does make a better e than a now that I look at it. Gotta try that in a piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 zen the zens are ok but that handstyle is lame, it takes away from the sketch... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stealthyxcougar Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 thnx bro, 2 weeks and i already have beef... im just tryin to get up let's make a list as to why people are a bit perturbed 1. you went over prominent writers in your area 2. you ask for a prominent writers user name (like anyone would just tell you, ya dumbfuck) 3. the shit you've said sounds more like an oink oink piggy than that of a new writer any questions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted October 1, 2010 Share Posted October 1, 2010 hahahahaha fucking kids! for all you new writers please take note of daku, this is exactly what you dont want to do when you start writing first find someone that has been writing for a good while then listen to everything they say add a few years... then you will better than daku will ever be Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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