kNowLedGe_ Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 any comments ?! i know there's shit i aint seeing... i know some of the 3d is off btw. it was a quick sketch with sharpies ha... no excuses though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RES4 Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 this eons isnt as bad as your all saying. the e is the only bad thing along with the spiky shit at the bottom. just get rid of the connections at the top and dont listen to everybody on here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KidsOnLsd Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 those bars at the top are ugly, get rid of the extensions and it'll look alot nicer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 Daos, for starters the picture is too dark to really see anything, secondly i would say ure letter thicknesses have no consistency to them. My advice would be; get rid of the extensions and serifs and make your letters all the same thickness, also, sort out the 3d. Practice can be rough but thats no excuse for sloppy lines and messed 3d/shadow. Thats just my opinion, im not a pro and i post in the toy forum lol. Anyone else wanna weigh in on this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finEyoungCamel!!! Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 you're mean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 unfinished im startin to like this whole chaos sketch page thing... did two pages of your name Cruise to get used to the letters but this is turnin out to be the best one so after i finish the center piece imma ink em all and post the finished product... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 also for those complainin about bein told to do simples, theres a reason behind it.. we're not bein mean or nuthin.. simples help you get used to the different letters structure and help you get an ideal on how to space them.. every graffiti artist has started with simples its the first step and an important one that you cant skip if you plan to stay in this game long.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 real talk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 don't write Dao, write Sik Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
finEyoungCamel!!! Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 me and my boy desc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crwpwns Posted December 28, 2010 Share Posted December 28, 2010 help? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skeetfunk Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 damn i feel like people should read like 10 pages of this thread before posting and see what advice theyre deffinatly going to get.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 CRO AND BRO.:lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SPEAKBTK Posted December 29, 2010 Share Posted December 29, 2010 bump for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 help? ^^^You're gonna need more than that. I won't even tell you what to do. go back and read any 10 pages of this thread if you want help. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 just because, i know it's the wrong thread... keepin it simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 looking pretty good man... im not digging the n overlapping the a the way it does but thats my personal opinion and the n looks a little squished compared to the other letters other than that its nice and concise and to the point Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DakuOne Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 sorry to disappoint, but im back again 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 much better daku, keep using bars to build letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 30, 2010 Share Posted December 30, 2010 nice simples hyper.. and that khan is clean... exchange with cruise... for the record c's and u's are not my letters... but i think i pulled it off... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 ^^^ killer man, that fat handstyle down the right side is hella nice. Nice fade on the main crus piece too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 like those cruz: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RECNEPS Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 I got you bud. Big ups. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 Pleased how the second page came out. Any pointers? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phere Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 looks phresh.. specially the middle one on the second page.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeSent Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted December 31, 2010 Share Posted December 31, 2010 sometimes you have to think- "was that really worth it?" I ate Mickey Dee's for breakfast, taco bell for lunch, and I had a hot pocket when I got home. Needless to say, I now have a new asshole. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SheenOne Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 print out trains-- pretty dope Untitled by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr definitly hate the N Untitled by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 24 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 26 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 19 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 17 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 10 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 11 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr Picture 7 by xX_SHEEN_ADK_Xx, on Flickr hey guys im new to 12 oz-- reackone got me on here, but ive been on puregraffiti forums for a while now so... yep im only 14 so im not that good, been in the game a year now so ive improved this is a bunch of new stuff:lol: :lol: btw HAPPY NEW YEAR Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWiF407 Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 ^^here's a tip- no dry snitching. not even on yourself. You don't realize it, but any information you put out on 12oz you will regret down the line, real talk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heyzues Posted January 1, 2011 Share Posted January 1, 2011 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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